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the no-sleep bus

Semester finals are next week.

The ultimate study groove requires a certain ambience, like a cafe.
Nothing fancy, any shop that’ll let me grift, at a table unbothered, for six hours - with the rain tip-tapping the window, like a pulse needing auscultation - will do.

I’m on the no-sleep bus and there’s no coasting
luckily, my hippocampus flourishes in café's light.
I’m trading sleep for synapses
with drills on repeat - if I rest, I forget, if I keep thinking, I fray
but exhaustion can buy me two more rounds of flashcards
I’m pumping espresso blood
wearing half-ironed looks

Have you ever noticed how the Paris metro-map resembles a somatic nerve? On the metro, between Porte de Saint-Ouen and École Militaire - as Paris slides by - I practice diagramming the scapula on my iPad Pro. Blurry Paris, blurry neon, blurry anatomy.
And I’m starting to think in Latin - ‘os talus coniungitur..’

If I’m not memorizing something,
it’s because my mind’s been scraped raw
and I’m on autopilot - more often than not,
Peter (my bf) drags me to bed @ 2am

But salvation comes - next Saturday - in the form of Noel school break.
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A Christmas playlist for this: =]
daweb.us/xmas/Christmas_18.mp3
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os talus coniungitur = nursery rhyme “the ankle bone’s connected to..”
auscultation = examination
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Conn Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 11:29 PM
The epitome of an Animated Temptation you are; In other words, a god damn joy. =]
Vionet Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 6:35 AM
Thank you, Chris =]
Parker Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 12:55 PM
You're gonna be the funnest physician ever!!! Or the most read essayist, poet, novelist, columnist, philosopher, chic chick. So much gifting so little time....oh, right, you're a mere 21....so much time to explore so much gifting, Eflin One. Joyeux Noël
Vionet Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 3:43 PM
22, not 21 - see? I’m aging fast =]
Fallica Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Ten stops. Change at Invalides. I checked. The Metro has gotten WAY more complicated since the ‘80s. . . . Diagramming the scapula? Youse don’t have anatomy coloring books in France? . I . umm . ‘enjoyed’ nursing school. . . . I drew a diagram of MY heart a few years ago. The chambers, arteries, veins, etc., are labeled with the names of the women who’ve carved their names on them. Wish I could post it here for you. . . . Can’t wait to read how you encode the endocrine system into a piece. . <3
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December 12, 2025 at 9:11 PM
"the women who’ve carved their names on them," I LOVE that, so fun. =] The scapula looks pretty simple but the diagramming is when you explain where muscles originate or insert, the various articulations, structures and margins.. bla bla bla. I KNOW that'll be on one test guaRANteed.
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