Notes About The Poem

Not real, pure imagination.

The Noise

It was the quietest of hums deep pitched
that appeared to be surrounding me.
It did not have the sizzle of electricity
and was not a light or the fridge.

Hunting high and low trying to make sense
of where it was originating from.
A few hours later and still no wiser
I sat back and pondered on things.

Next I tried turning off the power
which made not a smidgeon of difference.
It was still there quietly emitting sound
I knew what I needed to track it down.

I got out a stethoscope and placed it
first to the walls and then to the ceiling.
Ah now I knew what it was, munching away
slowly demolishing the whole of my house.

Feasting away, leaving behind a clue
a small pile of very fine wood.
Yes I was infested by a very small grub
commonly known as a wood worm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 3:17 PM
wow! like locust invaders.
Godwin Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 10:02 PM
Clever and entertaining write! So glad you tracked down that pesky noise, and, hopefully, handled the problem. Good write, clear story with good delivery, it more than held my interest. All the best ... CayCay
Roper Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 5:05 PM
Very good write, Shadow...oh my ... not something I want around my home.. a 7 Hugs
Gazbowski Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 10:25 AM
A wonderful piece of writing.
Daniel Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:20 AM
A well executed poem, Shadow, it maintains the suspense till the end:) great example for your contest:)
Callus Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 4:25 PM
A suspenseful poem which keeps the reader curious and on edge at the same time. A wood worm infested house could be a real calamity; it's bad enough when it concerns furniture, let alone a whole wooden house!! ~ Regards // paul
Dutta Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 12:01 PM
Nice piece . So well composed. I am familiar of this task of wood worm
Poteet Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:49 AM
Great piece, Shadow. Kept my attention up to the very last word. Hoping it is fiction
Sathasivam Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Excellent and such a vivid descriptive write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Murray Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 4:55 PM
Was there a doctor in the house? A saw doctor perhaps?
Canerdy Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Wow! Interesting story well told! Wood worms--Imagine that! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Wow, you really were able to narrow it down there, Shadow. That was great how you did it! I have a question for you. Can our poem be an old one that we date? Thanks for your last contest. I loved its theme.
La France Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Shadow, great example for your contest, I liked your sense of humour evident in this poem
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Such a vivid descriptive write and the imagery of being able to hear those little critters eating away really chilled me. :-) hugs Jan xx
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