The Noble Season

Some pretty eyes may wear glasses.
So, love too sadly always passes
Where we turn it into burning ashes,
But lovers may remind in flashes.

All feel no time as passing away
And sacred beauty, may return no more.
Some eyes he certainly met before,
Will try to see the dream and way.

Once departed, the verses from the stanza,
May not regain the perfume of the day
Nor that lost date with a lover alley,
In spite of merry hot extravaganza.

Desire hidden in the flute of bone,
But verses let not your soul be alone
In wishful thought and never known,
The same, this playful day is lasting one.

While tears try to change the horoscope,
The Noble Season dies; but, having hope,
Good man can smile to other scope:
Some hearts to Rubaiyat still slope.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/12/2017 4:08:00 AM
The Noble reason has drawn a line in my hearts with sweetness!
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Date: 12/10/2016 5:01:00 AM
A nicely penned poem, Ovidiu:)
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Date: 12/2/2016 12:18:00 PM
So nice piece. I liked it.Best wishes
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Date: 11/18/2016 3:32:00 PM
Wonderful Rubaiyat, Ovidiu. Elaine
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Date: 11/9/2016 2:35:00 PM
Some hearts to rubaiyat still slope" wow I found that line real appealing. An intriguing poem with veiled intent. Exceptional rhyming and phrasing. The first stanza on the state of love sick jilted feel. Kudos.
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Date: 11/9/2016 1:34:00 PM
so poignant and wonderfully crafted, ovidiu...huggs
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Ovidiu Bocsa
Date: 11/9/2016 1:46:00 PM
Best regards an wishes. So, Nette is near:on net. She writes the incredibly beautiful verses, I bet.
Date: 11/8/2016 3:05:00 PM
Beautifully expressed my friend with really good rhyme and rhythm. Beautiful emotion expressed here. I'm sure as time passes we all remember a sweet love we have lost and in our memory that love seems to be sweeter yet. Though it passes in time it lives forever in our heart. Well done. God Bless and a seven from me. JB
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