The Night's Ebon

The night's ebon before sunrise, In stillness, the stars lie awake, New moon is hidden, black sky sighs, Who will terminate this dark ache? Crystal twinkles wink and partake in Aurora's sparkling surprise, A cock crows thrice, the Lord will break the night's ebon before sunrise, Nothing escapes the Maker's eyes, He knows night's anguish and will shake her dull stupor, placate her cries; In stillness, the stars lie awake, Time, nocturnal gloom, to forsake, The heavenly bodies devise a silent spell until daybreak - New moon is hidden, black sky sighs, This nightly daze is a disguise to hide that cavernous mistake of heeding her tenebrous lies, Who will terminate this dark ache? The sun steps in for sad night's sake, Glows gold in the glorious skies, Brightens the day, ends her heartache, Thus, the dazzling dawn of hope dyes the night's ebon.
14th March 2023
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George Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Beautifully written Joanna ! Congratulations on your well deserved first place win!
May Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 11:41 AM
Wonderful write Jo, Congrats on your win
Bueckert Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 11:04 AM
Lovely words and well deserved win :) congrats!
Peck Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Beautiful. I especially love the last two lines.
Faulkner Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Very picturesque, I really like 'In stillness, the stars lie awake' and 'a silent spell until daybreak' - best wishes for the contest~
Buhagiar Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 3:15 AM
Well constructed poem.
Turner Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Beautifully composed , Jo. A joy to read. good luck!
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