The Nightly Shadow

The shadow in the night beckons.
I slowly rise from my warm and cosy bed
Only to follow the urge that drives me mad
Into spectral half-fledged woodland,
That spreads beyond my lonely tower.
 
Without volition, I approach slowly
A great, gaunt gate that towered
Over a ghostly path among the ashen trees.
A pale moon lights the blanched greensward,
That covered thinly the winding trail,
And from afar, I hear a river,
I hear its humming, throbbing, low, ferocious call,
Meant to disturb the serenity of my soul.

But I force myself into my somnambulism, 
And perhaps, lull myself to dream of angels.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kitchin Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 3:49 AM
Victor, a captivating poem, well penned.
Hind Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 1:47 PM
I love love this. In my favs- deep, great
Greenhough Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 6:51 AM
I enjoy this type of poem that has a flair of Poe. Somnabulism can be dangerous. I hope you don't walk in your sleep.
Roper Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Love the storytelling poems you’ve been writing. Great imagery and feelings to keep the interest of reading going. I enjoyed reading my friend.
Singh Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 6:05 AM
I read the poem at bedtime and so interesting.You faced the situation very well.
Rolland Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 1:18 AM
beautiful and cute images, dreaming is so safe, thanks poet
Buehler Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 2:32 PM
Victor, the fantastic imagery of your stellar poem, makes its night scenery and the act of sleepwalking, seem very real. I enjoyed this story, and especially the final two lines. :)
Poet Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 8:19 AM
What a wonderful descriptive poem, Victor. Sleepwalking is a serious problem that might lead to a dangerous situation. Your emotions are so deeply embedded.
Rodgers Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 5:16 AM
Dear Victor, O' how your words create such a haunting, yet deeply introspective journey. I enjoyed the quiet urgency, the pull of the night, and the tension between fear and longing. It’s like walking through a dream, half aware, half lost, but utterly alive. Stunning. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 1:16 AM
- A wonderful poem, Victor (I read it on FB yesterday) ... enjoy it today too :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 1:12 AM
Dear victor, as always youve written a poem that flows with such descriptive and detailed imagery that takes the readers on a journey through what youv written about. I see through your lines and i cant help but admire the slow and smooth flow of word weaving here and also how youv expressed so many emotions that are soul stirring! I hope ofcourse only pleasant dreams would be what you receive too. Pleasure reading this profound poem! Sending you light always.
Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 1:17 PM
It is amazing that some people do that ~sleepwalking. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Sands Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 11:44 AM
Great one. Described well. :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 10:20 AM
Quite a forboding verse Victor, the night certainly plays tricks on the mind, you just long for daybreak. Tom
DiMino Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Wow! Absolutely soul stirring. Control our dreams, grasp dominion...and all else will be healed and glorified. Great writing, Victor!
Read Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 7:25 AM
Hi Victor, you describe the feeling of loneliness perfectly, hope your keeping well dear friend.
Sharma  Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Ohh my, what an incredibly heartfelt and poignant write this is, dear Victor! So evocatively you've described the void of loneliness which gets accompanied by a different sense of melancholy. Such profound use of nature here to convey the intended emotions, in an intriguing manner! I'm really awestruck by your use of metaphor here whilst painting an imagery of one's soul getting disturbed by even the humming sound of the river, which otherwise was meant to calm the spirit! Similar to how even silence can feel so haunting sometimes! I deeply felt your words! Sending you light and best wishes always ~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 5:42 AM
Interesting to enter the mind of a man, alone, likewise fairly frightened by shadows and thoughts, humanity’s darkness. Praying for your peace of mind. Enjoyed, as always, your writing! Hugs
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