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The Nightly Shadow

The shadow in the night beckons. I slowly rise from my warm and cosy bed Only to follow the urge that drives me mad Into spectral half-fledged woodland, That spreads beyond my lonely tower. Without volition, I approach slowly A great, gaunt gate that towered Over a ghostly path among the ashen trees. A pale moon lights the blanched greensward, That covered thinly the winding trail, And from afar, I hear a river, I hear its humming, throbbing, low, ferocious call, Meant to disturb the serenity of my soul. But I force myself into my somnambulism, And perhaps, lull myself to dream of angels.

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Date: 2/17/2025 3:49:00 AM
Victor, a captivating poem, well penned.
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Date: 2/14/2025 1:47:00 PM
I love love this. In my favs- deep, great
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Date: 2/14/2025 6:51:00 AM
I enjoy this type of poem that has a flair of Poe. Somnabulism can be dangerous. I hope you don't walk in your sleep.
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Date: 2/13/2025 7:08:00 PM
Love the storytelling poems you’ve been writing. Great imagery and feelings to keep the interest of reading going. I enjoyed reading my friend.
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Date: 2/13/2025 6:05:00 AM
I read the poem at bedtime and so interesting.You faced the situation very well.
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Date: 2/13/2025 1:18:00 AM
beautiful and cute images, dreaming is so safe, thanks poet
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Date: 2/12/2025 2:32:00 PM
Victor, the fantastic imagery of your stellar poem, makes its night scenery and the act of sleepwalking, seem very real. I enjoyed this story, and especially the final two lines. :)
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Date: 2/12/2025 8:19:00 AM
What a wonderful descriptive poem, Victor. Sleepwalking is a serious problem that might lead to a dangerous situation. Your emotions are so deeply embedded.
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Date: 2/12/2025 5:16:00 AM
Dear Victor, O' how your words create such a haunting, yet deeply introspective journey. I enjoyed the quiet urgency, the pull of the night, and the tension between fear and longing. It’s like walking through a dream, half aware, half lost, but utterly alive. Stunning. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/12/2025 1:16:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Victor (I read it on FB yesterday) ... enjoy it today too :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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Date: 2/12/2025 1:12:00 AM
Dear victor, as always youve written a poem that flows with such descriptive and detailed imagery that takes the readers on a journey through what youv written about. I see through your lines and i cant help but admire the slow and smooth flow of word weaving here and also how youv expressed so many emotions that are soul stirring! I hope ofcourse only pleasant dreams would be what you receive too. Pleasure reading this profound poem! Sending you light always.
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Date: 2/11/2025 1:17:00 PM
It is amazing that some people do that ~sleepwalking. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 2/11/2025 11:44:00 AM
Great one. Described well. :)
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Date: 2/11/2025 10:20:00 AM
Quite a forboding verse Victor, the night certainly plays tricks on the mind, you just long for daybreak. Tom
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Date: 2/11/2025 8:47:00 AM
Wow! Absolutely soul stirring. Control our dreams, grasp dominion...and all else will be healed and glorified. Great writing, Victor!
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Date: 2/11/2025 7:25:00 AM
Hi Victor, you describe the feeling of loneliness perfectly, hope your keeping well dear friend.
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Date: 2/11/2025 6:25:00 AM
Ohh my, what an incredibly heartfelt and poignant write this is, dear Victor! So evocatively you've described the void of loneliness which gets accompanied by a different sense of melancholy. Such profound use of nature here to convey the intended emotions, in an intriguing manner! I'm really awestruck by your use of metaphor here whilst painting an imagery of one's soul getting disturbed by even the humming sound of the river, which otherwise was meant to calm the spirit! Similar to how even silence can feel so haunting sometimes! I deeply felt your words! Sending you light and best wishes always ~
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Date: 2/11/2025 5:42:00 AM
Interesting to enter the mind of a man, alone, likewise fairly frightened by shadows and thoughts, humanity’s darkness. Praying for your peace of mind. Enjoyed, as always, your writing! Hugs
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