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This a poem dedicated to my loving Dean who joined our Father in Heaven.. I can never forget her hugs and hellos each time she sees me during enrollment and during duties... One of my toughest professors but a grade earned from her is worth every sweat and sleepless nights I have.... Her whole name Anita Mondala.

The Nightingale Lost Her Lamp

THE NIGHTINGALE LOST HER LAMP Anita’s eyes were brown. She was the kindest of angels. Her speech firm with authority but reassuring with a glass- like sensitivity; she seemed to know all. Prompt as a rooster's first crow, that's how she is. She stands like a lioness ever ready to act, a channel to prolong the patient's life. Her heart is a captive cog of dedicated compassion: as a wife, as a mother, as a Dean, Professor, and as a nurse. She stood always regal in white. Bearing a sanction of life and death with each shot made by her gentle hands. She had Tiger eyes for signs and symptoms; sponges to absorb order and pressures, she was simply a lamp for a sick person. Our batch, she handles with iron fist. Labeled as "black sheep" – for some of us are noisy cans but empty inside. Black sheep but later turned into the cream of the crop. She stood as our Samson pillars then despite canyons of doubts and critiques, our batch defies the odds. Yet, one day a snapshot happened – She fainted while teaching. She was brought to the hospital, scrutinized and observed like the frog in my sophomore year. I was one of the nurses who rendered care. I watched, how the shining light in her eyes turned to stormy sadness. I have heard how her sturdy voice now sounded a tattered tape only syllables and groans, no more. Her before supple glowing skin turned a wrinkled ash — all tautness gone. Finally, she needs only bags of blood in two days her life passed my Anita... _______________________________________________________ Sponsor Thomas Martin Contest Name Show but Don't Tell Placed 3rd... O.E. Guillermo 5:15 pm, May 19, 2015
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Makama Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 12:17 PM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
Robertson Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 6:16 AM
Beautiful Olive Eloisa. She did what The Good Lord put her here to do, take a look at the others, take a look at you... Time to move on. Time to take the next step.
Makama Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 10:40 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
Kiser Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Such is life...the physical ending way too soon, but we have the living memories. A beautiful tribute, indeed.
Nunez Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 6:20 PM
This is such a heartfelt write, Olive. So sorry to hear that someone whose life has deeply touched yours and many others had to die early. You've done well with this tribute. Congratulations on your win!
A   Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Olive, Congrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 6:21 PM
OH MY. IT all can end so quickly. This was a passionate write and so tragic.
A  Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Olive, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 11:26 PM
Thank you so much Skat.. =")
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 2:22 PM
this descriptive write brought tears to my eyes Olive - her memory will live on through this wonderful tribute- congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:14 PM
Thank you so much Jan.. I'm glad that you have been touched.. =")!
Deschler Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 2:13 PM
A beautiful and heartfelt tribute for her, Olive Eloisa. Her compassionate spirit has been captured forever in this poem. Very nicely penned! :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Thank you so much Kelly, I could not have done this better without the support of someone.. Im thankful that I met her and truly her life--an inspiration..=")!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 5:55 AM
Very touching tribute. Your poem is very expressive and impressive. Thanks for sharing.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Hi Ravi thanks much for stopping by and leaving a comment.. =") the person behind the lines is also lovable.. that is my dean..
Muideen Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:12 AM
So sad, so touched Olive. Sorry for your loss...........);Afolabi.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 8:49 AM
thank you so much.. =')
Leiser Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 9:03 PM
What a brilliant write! Such powerful words and imagery, WOW! I was a nurse for many years, and know what kind of strength it takes to be dedicated to a challenging profession. I'm so sorry if this was a real event, and dear Anita passed on. Excellent, a 7 from me!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 1:25 AM
LAura, I thank you so much for your generous comment.. =') this a big boost!
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Sad to see a very strong and caring person become so physically ill..I know that was painful for all who loved and cared for her to watch.I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for dropping..Sara
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 5:46 AM
Thanks so much Sara.. she is indeed a strpng and caring person.. :)! SHE IS ONE among my fave mentors... they build up my character, skills, competency and discipline as a nurse ..
Pinet Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 1:11 PM
Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and pay tribute to the memories of a respected teacher and friend. Emile.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 1:48 AM
thank you so much Emile.. :)~
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 10:57 AM
What a lovely and touching tribute, Olive_eloi! Your poem is expressive and impressive. People like her will be missed. Hugs // paul
Callus Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 1:30 PM
And congratulations on a deserved win!!! Well done!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:49 AM
thank you so much Paul... :)!
La France Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 10:10 AM
Olive this poem is so sad I am so sorry for your loss 7 and thanks for visiting my poem today
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:48 AM
thanks too Broken wings.. :)!!!Her memories lives on through us her students.. :)!
Hopper Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 8:36 AM
This is an exquisite poem! Way beyond a 7 for me! So very, very beautiful! God bless you!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:47 AM
thanks much Anna .. my simple way to say my love for one of my dearest mentors..
Lamoureux Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 8:24 AM
So sory for your loss, you brought her spirit to us with this powerful reflective piece.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:43 AM
thanks much Richard.. :)! God bless us all.. ~olive eloisa
Das Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 7:18 AM
Very beautiful dedication. RIP Anita. Even here in India a nurse Aruna Shanbaug passed away after living in a vegetative state for 42 years, but for her it was a release....nice poem. 7
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:36 AM
Sometimes when sufferings too much it both pains not only the person but also those who love her..... thanks much for stopping by..
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