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The Night Is Young

The pulsing redness of the dying sun,
Began to prevail into nothingness.
Yet all around the promenade
Bright lights shone from the business venue.

They sat on a bench, close, whispering sweet nothings.
The night was young, and they had much to say.
Would they wait for dawn?

Lights shimmer on the quiet sea,
like drifting dreams that never fade away.
She was tired and rested her head
On his shoulder as he held her close.

Then things began to shift.
Around the bay, bulbs were now in full light
The brass band began to blare.
Everyone was happily singing.

And in the depth of the bay
Fireworks cracked upwards
Sending sparkling stars above
It is a journey of excellent exhibition.

The two lovers stood up hand in hand.
And began their walk far from the crowd
Towards the quiet, where the moon had arisen.
A lovely red moon that was their wonder,
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 5:38 PM
captivating love poem...the last line captured my heart.
George Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 8:26 PM
"She was tired and rested her head On his shoulder as he held her close." Tenderly romantic and very much a real life situation. Your beaches always smell of romance. Beautiful.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 1:27 AM
Very romantic poetry Victor, fireworks and a lovely red moon, wonderful… Beryl
Hind Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 6:08 PM
lovely!! romantic
Empress Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 11:52 AM
Theres always such seamless storytelling in your poems dear Victor, this is no exception, I really love the vivid imagery and the flow and depth of what youv conveyed here in such a heart touching manner! I especially love the lines "Fireworks cracked upwards Sending sparkling stars above It is a journey of excellent exhibition." How captivating is that! Just loved it! I can see through your lines! Pleasure reading! Sending you light today and always
Sharma  Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 10:36 AM
Oh such spellbinding and smooth imagery you've painted on the canvas, dear Victor! So poetically pleasing and alluring and these lines indeed hold a very heartfelt essence ~ "Lights shimmer on the quiet sea, like drifting dreams that never fade away." Adore that so much! The night sky.. the love-filled atmosphere and the mysterious wonder of the red moon.. such a gorgeous piece! Pleasure reading this, sending you light and best wishes always ~
Buehler Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 9:10 PM
The night sky must have been so beautiful, with the red moon, the setting red sun, and the glitter of fireworks. Love both the picture and the romantic poem, which is a fave. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 6:48 PM
I see you pinned this one. It is lovely and romantic.
Rolland Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 3:02 PM
nice scenery, i missed a second time my hometown fireworks, just sleeping to soon, regret that blessings poet
May Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 12:59 PM
Very nice imagery in this verse, best wishes
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 11:45 AM
Hello Victor, This is a lovely poem. I sense romance. Wishing you to a wonderful day. YOur friend, /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 7:47 AM
Fireworks are so pretty to see like this is pretty to read. Great write with picture. Love Both. Oh to be young/sitting on a bench. Love your last line. Have a lovely day writing away..........
Anaya Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 6:18 AM
The bench of lovers, often mentioned in your romantic poems dear Victor. Enjoyed immensely. Blessings
Smith  Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 6:05 AM
Beautifully portrayed dear Victor.
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 5:23 AM
Such a flawless night, a flawless universe. To put it simply, Victor, love is ideal. This poetry is just beautiful; it is passionate and sensory pleasing.
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 4:40 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic and emotive work you have penned. Thank you for sharing this one filled with feeling with us. Way to go. Sara K.
DiMino Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 4:28 AM
A perfect evening -- a perfect world. Love is indeed perfect. A perfectly delightful poem, so romantic and appealing to the senses. Well said, Victor.
Daniels Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 3:52 AM
A beautiful Love poem seamlessly moving from public exhibitions of light to the natural beauty of a red moon. I like how you’ve divided the poem to do the shift, yet retaining the “redness”.> very clever way to integrate the two aspects of life. Catchy title & delicately romantic. I enjoyed. B the Light, Sir Poet.
Daniel Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 2:49 AM
So sweet and romantic, Victor:)
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 2:11 AM
- I wish I was sitting on that bench... a lovely and romantic evening/night - Love this, Victor :) - hugs
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