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The Night Dad Died

There are those moments that stay with us forever stuck in time, we will forget them never The night I picked up the phone, it was late how could this be his fate? I drove and on my way I got a flat tire this seemed a cruel and divinely planned satire The tow truck man could not remove the lug nuts Almost midnight now and I thought he was a putz When mom's door opened there were swollen eyes I was the strong one to my surprise We made the plans and bought the box I look back now and know I was still in shock My hair came out in clumps as I showered Being strong and holding it in was not making me feel empowered Then about three months later it hit me like a wall my father was gone, I would not see him at all I had not cried at all until that day It seemed I could not stop now to my dismay My words of wisdom to pass on to you my friend Tell those you love how you feel every now and again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/6/2014 6:26:00 PM
Dear Willow, I love your poem. I miss my Dad too. I'll never forget the day he died. He had suffered from a stroke and we had hospice coming in to help us take care of him. The day he died, I had gone in his bedroom to give him his medication. I could tell he seemed like he was taking his last breaths. I called my Mom over. She called the nurse from Hospice. We called my sister at work. I'll never forget that day. I really relate to your poem Celine Rose Mariotti
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Willow Lawrence
Date: 11/16/2014 8:50:00 AM
So sorry for your loss....dad's are so special. We never forgot those moments. Willow xoxo
Date: 11/1/2014 8:23:00 PM
Good advice always appreciated.
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Date: 10/13/2014 8:47:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poetry Willow. and your nice comments. This is a lovely poem fro your daddy. I lost my daddy 60 years ago. I still miss him. I hope he knew how much I loved him. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/12/2014 1:30:00 PM
You have found a wonderful outlet here at soup and you have made friends and fans to boot. I hope that you continue to write and post. Until you are the poet read the most. I love you dear soul with all I am and I am indeed fortunate to be your man. Express yourself more and more and leave the blues laying on the floor.
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Willow Lawrence
Date: 10/12/2014 1:32:00 PM
Thank you my dear man...xoxo
Date: 10/12/2014 1:14:00 PM
Oh Willow my heart goes out to you ... my dad has terminal cancer I see him every day .. I've been tearful today it doesn't usually get me down but i can see him fading:-( Hugs to us both Jan xxxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2014 1:48:00 PM
Thanks for those lovely words Bobb:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Jasonpoet Boyd
Date: 10/12/2014 1:33:00 PM
Jan just remember we are not our bodies we are eternal souls. We do not die we transition to the next existence either with God or in darkness depending on our hearts and knowing God. Remember you are an eternal soul and so is yours and Willows dads

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