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The New World/Cutting Off the Fat

kind be the same sh!@ only you'd be doing it for love not money

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/19/2009 4:34:00 AM
Love is so uplifting when pure. Very interesting write. (Regarding the I don't know about form. Here is a little helpful information. One more syllable on the last line and it would be written in the traditional haiku form. But I think you could still call it a variation of Haiku. just trying to help.) Keep writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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