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The New West Coast

There are boats resting on the Idaho shore. The west coast we once knew is no more. Frisco and Los Angeles we can no longer see. They have become places in our history. Oakland and Fresno are at the bottom of the sea. They are like the Atlantis of antiquity. We tried to warn the populace, but to no avail. It only took one good shake on the Richter Scale. Goodbye to what we knew as “California”. Let’s spend some time on the beach in Nevada.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2012 2:33:00 PM
Shades of Edgar Cayce! Hope this Richter Scale happening is far into the future. My son Lives in San Francisco. I should say - hope this never happens, period. Enjoyed this mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 2/6/2012 12:43:00 PM
gee thanks, since we have been told for years one good quake and this little island will be gone, we have over 300 measurable quakes a year, one the day before yesterday at about a 5 point something, we should be used to them I suppose, anything under 6.5 we ignore, interesting topic for a poem
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Date: 2/6/2012 12:26:00 PM
Written in a humorous tone but we all know that there is the possiblity of severe change from natural phenomenon..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 2/6/2012 11:41:00 AM
Very clever and definitely something to think about it! I know I wouldn't live over there. Although, I have heard scientists speak of a tsunami wiping out the east coast. No where to hide! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:42:00 AM
I would be worried living on the coast as it is a time bomb waiting to slide. Great poem and I like the way you liken it to Atlantis. Wonder if that what happened to Atlantis. love phyl
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:41:00 PM
Great poem, Robert. They claim that he biggest fault is not California but the middle of the USA. Cheers, Maureen
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