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The Never Ending Now

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Upon a breathless moment in time, A thousand hells do exist; Within a paralyzed paradigm A love is lost in the mist. Where hearts are broken forever, Amidst the never ending now; As anguished sorrows sever And tears break the bough. A twinkling second of love lost, Like mirages melting of mind; A neglected nuance in frost Caged memories are confined. In an instant love is crushed, And a lonely moment hushed. July.17.2020 JUST A MOMENT Poetry Sponsored by~ John lawless Placed 4'th...Thank You

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2022 12:08:00 AM

A very belated congrats to one who passed and whose poetry I hope remains here always.

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/13/2022 4:18:00 PM

"When you walk into the room, I stand on shaky ground" comes to mind... but when you walked out--the grounds of hell have shaken me. Levels of hell I hold suppressed. Touching

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 4/9/2021 11:31:00 AM

a beautiful mind and heart. I hear you loud and clear. x

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/27/2021 7:16:00 PM

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John Hamilton

Date: 11/12/2020 7:48:00 AM

What a talent you were John, your writing was always so deeply touching,,,will never forget you!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/10/2020 3:15:00 PM

A lovely sonnet, dear friend. I've missed your visits and reading your words. God bless you always and congrats on your winning entry :)

John Watt

Date: 8/4/2020 10:03:00 PM

A truly sad elegy, Wings, conveyed so wistfully and poetic. You always amaze, sir poet. Loved this, and I congratulate you for your fine high placing win, my friend ~ JW

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/4/2020 9:30:00 PM

WW congratulations! This sonnet is filled with breathtaking images and poetic expression - "paralyzed paradigm," "mirages melting," "never ending now" and heartbreaking emotion. Well done!

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/4/2020 4:34:00 PM

Spot on verse. Very cleverly devised. I think the alliteration is fitting.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/4/2020 12:46:00 PM

Your heartfelt muse takes me on a journey of that crushing moment. You've penned your emotions so delicately WW. Congratulations on your win my friend ^_^

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/4/2020 6:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win, WW ~ well penned

John Lawless

Date: 8/4/2020 5:30:00 AM

The magnificent opening couplet of this sonnet pleaded.....read on.....read on...beautifully done.

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/3/2020 8:55:00 PM

Only when they took the dog or cat was I really upset:) Excellent writing. A heart can be broken in an instant...and then take lifetimes to mend.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/22/2020 7:17:00 PM

A truly wonderful and beautiful sonnet my great friend. Such an immense pleasure to read! Every stanza a true and inspiring gem! A fav.. God bless...

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/19/2020 7:12:00 AM

Winged Warrior, I really like the premise of your skillfully written Sonnet. No need for alliteration when a poet writes of lost love, in fact it's best when not overdone.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 7/19/2020 12:59:00 AM

Wow! winging it's way towards a win...Wonderful WW....

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/18/2020 1:50:00 PM

I would love to hear you read one...Well done WW

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/18/2020 12:18:00 PM

Yes, it only takes 'an instant for love to be crushed - supercalifragerlisticexpialadocios! Amazing, awesome, mind-blowing - blessing and hugs WW, Jenny.

John Watt

Date: 7/17/2020 8:12:00 PM

I do remember that feeling of the floor falling out from under you when your realized your love was walking away and all you had invested went up in smoke. Great write, Wings, best wishes in the contest, my friend ~ JW

John Hamilton

Date: 7/17/2020 7:00:00 PM

OOHH this is really good WW, a sure winner(in my books at least)