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the nesting robin

the nesting robin while kneeling in my garden. . . sowing baby's breath March 1, 2019 for Tania Kitchin's Spring Haiku Contest

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Date: 3/15/2019 10:09:00 AM
awww, love this
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Date: 3/8/2019 8:51:00 PM
Can see this scene very well. lovely haiku. love phyl
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Date: 3/7/2019 5:00:00 PM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2019 6:46:00 PM
Beautiful write Andrea and congrats.
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Date: 3/3/2019 12:49:00 PM
Such a great haiku ~ congrats! “sowing baby’s breath”
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Date: 3/3/2019 12:27:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2019 11:37:00 AM
Beautiful, but most of all an impressive haiku which merited a higher placing. Congratulations!! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/3/2019 10:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 3/3/2019 9:37:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and uplifting thought in this exceptional haiku.... Both Nature and human life presented and uplifting aura created.. A fav.. a true gem...
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:12:00 AM
Indeed an impressive Spring haiku.
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:40:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:36:00 AM
Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:24:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your placement in contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/3/2019 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea...
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Date: 3/3/2019 6:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/3/2019 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Tom.
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Date: 3/3/2019 5:38:00 AM
A lovely haiku, love the imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 3/3/2019 4:57:00 AM
Ahh!! Cute one. I have never seen a nest with Robins but see them every spring in my yard. Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2019 8:17:00 PM
Field full I will need So those am able to feed After planting seed
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Date: 3/2/2019 12:31:00 PM
Love that last line Andrea...best wishes
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Date: 3/2/2019 4:30:00 AM
Ah, two of my favorite things in a poem. I see a beautiful robin, and baby's breath both quite clearly, wanting this to happen immediately if not sooner! Delicate and delightful, Andrea.
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Date: 3/1/2019 8:40:00 PM
Just beautiful, Andrea! Spring's around the corner...yay!
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Date: 3/1/2019 8:19:00 PM
This is lovely! I swear I could hear the robins singing!
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Date: 3/1/2019 7:10:00 PM
Is baby's breath some kind of flower? Received a call from a woman whom I hadn't spoken to in years. We got together! I am still single - maybe that is best for me. But I do have close female friends. Who knows what the future holds in store? Love will find a way! A new anthology is coming out with my poetry in it! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/1/2019 4:25:00 PM
Oh I can just see you in your garden, Andrea, looking up at the little bird's nest. And, Baby's Breath? What other plant could compliment the idea of a baby bird so perfectly?
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