The Necklace

   the subject of my attention -
how I turn you over and over in my head and hands
   gaining more focus 
  on my own mind's form and function
though in truth
          the whole world and I can disappear 
     if I give you thought

but yet - you are tangible
    can interrupt the space 
between universe and fingertips
        remind me that I am also real

perhaps, if I'm honest
   I long to look up
and meet the eye
      of the person who wonders
   what I'm thinking




Inspired by The Necklace - Waterhouse
Copyright Β© | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 6:40 PM
simply an amazing metaphor, all of this, genius! fav
G  Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:55 PM
Haha thank you! So kind!
Radice Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 12:17 AM
It’s been quite a while since I read your work L and if anything it’s just got better. (tbh I didn’t think that was possible). Now before you reach for the sick bucket I have to stress that I honestly do mean that. Your words always transport me & your poems don’t need pictures. Cheers - Gary
Radice Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 12:35 PM
Thanks L. I’m waiting patiently for a Hopper ekphrasis from you although his wife’s work was just as good in my opinion. That or an Emin. πŸ˜€ Cheers - Gary
G  Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 12:26 AM
Now Gary - I clicked the link to see what the comment was and completely unexpectedly I began smiling! If I were to be helpful I might indeed suggest you set a diary reminder to leave me comments like this πŸ₯° they are always welcome πŸ₯° since sick buckets are to hand at this point, I'll let you know why - respecting and enjoying a poets work is quite a joy (this is me now - acknowledging your magnitude in my poetry world - I'm a fan of 5 poets, max! Shh...) when one of those poets strolls over and says things like this it's a five star moment - thank you! 🀩
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 12:25 PM
So interesting…the tangible and yet the pearls of thought… Congrats on POTD!
G  Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 12:19 AM
Thank you Kim 😊 appreciated 😊
Poet Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 2:12 AM
Hearty congratulations on your contest win with this beautifully crafted poem.
G  Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 12:18 AM
Thanks Sotto
Smith  Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 7:43 PM
Back to congratulate you on placing in the 1495 contest, well deserved.
G  Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 12:18 AM
Many thanks Alison 😊
La France Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 4:32 PM
Laurentine, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ⭐
G  Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 4:33 PM
Thank you Constance 😊
Rodgers Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 10:47 AM
Dear Laurentine, I am back to celebrate you as you land POTD! Blessings, Daniel
G  Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 10:48 AM
Hurray! Most kind Daniel - thank you πŸ₯°
Gifford Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 12:03 AM
Hello Laurentine, congratulations on your beautiful poem being featured as POTD. An excellent write. Wishing you a wonderful day.
G  Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 2:38 AM
Thank you so much Zyrool 😊
Willason Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 11:41 PM
Spellbindind piece , very creative juxtaposition of perspectives. You are a master of this poetic form LG, working your alchemy to transform paint into poetry, pure gold. A rare gift. This poem keps giving. Look forward to your next transmutation. Paul
G  Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 2:38 AM
Well a visit from yourself is a treat in itself Paul and I love the fact I have followed you in POTD - a lovely coincidence πŸ₯° your high praise has me beaming 😁
Willason Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 12:17 AM
And of course a well deserved POTD ribbon to wear when you mix your magic.
Singh Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 9:20 PM
I love how necklace becomes a bridge between the inner world of thought and tangible world of reality.Besutifully penned.
G  Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 2:31 AM
Thank you Akham 😊 I appreciate your thoughtful words 😊
Nicole Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 7:48 PM
This thought is deep, yet light and airy at the same time. ' you are tangible can interrupt the space between universe and fingertips. ' You truly are an artist with your words, Laurentine. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
G  Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 2:29 AM
Thank you so much for such a generous statement Brandy - a lovely thing to hear. I'm glad you liked it 😊
Kauffman Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Laurentine. You have taken a simple necklace and turned it into an esoteric experience of life. So well done. Sending you blessings.
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:54 PM
Thanks Sam - there was so much to be lost within. I do enjoy considering moments like the one captured in this painting and creating an experience around it, thank you for your kind comment 😊
Edmonds  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 7:16 AM
Congratulations Laurentine on having received the honour of Poem of the Day for your lovely poem The Necklace … Beryl 🌸
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Beryl - much appreciated 😊 it is indeed an honour 😊
Cornish Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 6:15 AM
My darling Clementine...oops, Laurentine--I'm glad I can't see the painting because this lives totally on its own like every poem should (not a fan of pics with poems) - like many would say, "I liked the book better than the movie" and...the painting would interrupt my own emotions generated by your thoughts here---how poetry is a catalyst that the reader can own in their own lives---special writing here - as always! Not all writes are worthy of POTD - they got this one right!
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:52 PM
Oh most definitely the words I like to hear Craig! Once I've entered the painting to write, it becomes difficult to unsee - so it's nice to hear there is a vision that appears from just reading my words and it's a satisfactory one 😊I very much appreciate your vote of confidence, thank you 😊
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Wonderful evocative piece, I love it. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:48 PM
Oh Mo - "xomo" always gets me as a fantastic signoff! I'm glad it could evoke and be enjoyed - I never know if anyone but me will get them when I write them πŸ˜…πŸ₯°
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 5:58 AM
Love your interpretation of the painting LG, congratulations to you on today's POTD honour, well deserved too. Tom🌹
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 9:44 PM
It's the Turkish air LG 😁. Hope you're coping with the heat. Its hotter in the uk than here.
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Tom - you are always on your holidays when I get POTD! What's that all about πŸ˜…
Onpaper Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Wow what an absolute treat πŸ“–βœ¨.congratulations on POTD. how I turn you over and over in my head and hands.. love the emotions on that . This flows beautifully..meet the eye of the person who wonder what I'm thinking.. aah yes .. we all have those moments yes .. although I must say… for me .. sometimes … this is a fear as well πŸ˜…
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:45 PM
Ahh look at my visits! I'm spoiled today! The deer in headlights is most definitely a possibility! I've been reminiscing on my thoughts being sought after - it is a great feeling to feel interesting!
Rowe Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 5:21 AM
What a deep introspective piece. I can almost feel the necklace rolling between the fingertips in my mind as I'm reading this. Very well done and congrats on POTD.
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:41 PM
Ahh yes! That's the intention - to actually occupy the painting right up until the glance meets the eye of the viewer - thank you for your kind comment 😊
George Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 4:29 AM
"but yet you are tangible ............................... Remind me that I am also real" Great thought coming from the one who holds the necklace. Can we ever understand what hides behind the surface. Congratulations dear Laurentine on your well deserved POTD πŸ‘
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:40 PM
Thank you Valsa - we can never know what something is thinking, often in deep thought we can't always convey our own thoughts. Surface level there is perhaps the empty space waiting for eyes to meet for connection to create meaning. Thank you for your comment 😊
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 4:03 AM
outstanding imagery; you've captured the painting beautifully. congrats on your POTD designation.
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:37 PM
Thank you so much Sara 😊
Kitchin Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 3:10 AM
LG, a great poem with wonderful and beautiful imagery. I need to see the painting now. Congratulations on POTD.
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:37 PM
I hope you could track it down Tania - it's a beautiful artwork and hopefully my words pair well 😊
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:36 AM
A POTD to literally get lost in, we don’t see these to often on PS, the painting is beautiful and I hope everyone checks it out, then everything falls into place, to reveal a daydreaming moment, but we’ll never actually know what the protagonist is thinking, other than she is content in her bubble, A beautifully written Ekphrasis, Laurentine and deserved POTD, cheers David
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:35 PM
I appreciate your support David and your ability to get deep into the heart of my poems. There is something quite enticing about being absorbed, both to be part of and to observe in another. I wasn't sure whether this works standalone or not but it does indeed fall into place if the painting is viewed. The ability of Waterhouse to catch the moment just before whatever happens next feels charged with energy. Thank you for your repeat visit 😊
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:08 AM
- An interesting poem - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Laurentine :) -
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:30 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise - much appreciated 😊
Empress Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 1:17 AM
Erhm! My fave queen is back! 😱 I am a bit busy elsewhere today! (Why does this feel like dejavu) everytime I am away from soup, you get POTD! Haha gosh! Kismet! Congratulations on receiving POTD! Well I am always here to celebrate πŸ‘ πŸ₯²πŸ₯Ή Enjoy your beautiful moment πŸ† This poem definitely made me pause and ponder. Sending you light always ~ πŸ’« πŸ§œβ€β™€οΈ
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:29 PM
Thank you Ink for popping by with well wishes - yes dΓ©jΓ  vu! I'm travelling too at the moment (as you know πŸ˜…) I've forgotten which brand of champagne we clink πŸ₯‚
Empress Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 1:25 AM
Fave ofcourse
Jones Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 12:49 AM
Congratulations on your poem as today’s potd! Well done!😊
G  Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:24 PM
Thank you so much Karen - it was an unexpected surprise 😊
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