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The Naughty and Niceness of Winter Days

The naughty and niceness of Winter days
A blizzard of hate or blanket of snow?
Celebrations of violence or praise?
Will unity of man wither or grow?*

The naughty and niceness of Winter days…
Drunkenness and malice toward God and man,
Blasphemy on every carolers tongue,
Attempted destruction of heaven’s plan…

The naughty and niceness of Winter days.
Alms for the poor - blankets and coats accord.
Open hands for strangers, widows, orphans.
Cornucopia: meat and milk - God’s word.

The naughty and niceness of Winter days.
A blizzard of hate or blanket of snow?
Celebrations of violence or praise?
Will unity of man wither or grow?

The naughty and niceness of Winter days.
The purchase of souls for evil or right?
The glory of God or the deepest night?
Saints of the Holy Spirit obey.

The naughty and niceness of Winter days.
Does a cross on your back sound inviting?
A night of cold, labor, and loud mooing?
In the end it’s Christ who does the consoling.

The Father, looks on, far above the stars,
Sees the naughty and niceness of one’s days.
Those willing to forego a fortnight’s pleasure.
One’s years spent serving Him in the desert.

The naughty and niceness of Winter days
A blizzard of hate or blanket of snow?
Celebrations of violence or praise?
Will unity of man wither or grow?

11/30/2021

man - all people, the human race
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 8:27 AM
WOW!!! What a story/write. Love your ending. That is a great question. Guess only time will tell. I bet wither because of all of the evil in the world. Have a great/blessed day.....................
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 7:46 PM
Hello Kim ... it takes all kinds to hold a community together with the naughty at one end of the scale and the nice at the other end. In the middle, there are the waverers, and all these make life interesting, like your poem Kim - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 9:19 PM
Thanks, Lindsay!
George Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:37 PM
You generate deep thoughts in the mind by hurling some weighty questions....! Is this season a time for violence or praise, will unity of man wither or grow ... these are questions we can't answer ! Profound !
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa!
Ball Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 1:59 PM
There is none worthy or deserving of His forgiveness but because He loves us the way a Father loves His Children we are assured of His Salvation. Good Stuff my friend. God Bless and Merry Christmas. JB
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 7:24 PM
We live by his mercy and grace! We only need to accept and believe, follow and obey! God bless you and Merry Christmas month!!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:04 AM
A deep poem exposing the evil of mankind and hiding the real goodness we all desire. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 4:59 AM
Thank you, Victor! ~ hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 9:21 PM
I hope that it grows Kim " The naughty and niceness of Winter days. A blizzard of hate or blanket of snow? Celebrations of violence or praise? Will unity of man wither or grow?" and I know that you do also.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 4:59 AM
Yes! We are either part of the love or the hate. We must choose each day. ~ hugs
Wolf Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Wow. You certainly have given us readers a banquet of food for thought, Kim. Some hard looking in the mirror required as well, methinks. Kudos, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 8:01 PM
All of us, every day need to look in the mirror! Thank you, dear friend!
Sands Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 12:42 PM
Great poem Kim! Very well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
DiMino Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Excellent poetry! Of course, Days, nights, holidays, it is all about an ever-present spirit inside of each of us, operating outside time and space -- we are constantly naughty and nice...not seasonal. In every awake moment and in our dreams, God knows our souls, and responds appropriately -- now...and then!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Joe!So true! I agree!
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