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Life was never boring, Selling roses from my shop, You were invited to visit and You’d learn men’s secret affections. The first to arrive was the usual fare A well-built hunk of a man. Tall, dark and handsome that women adore. Twelve orange ones, he asked. Amazed I wondered what he had in mind, Must be a new fling no doubt. For orange means enthusiasm and desire. He knew well the language of sweet buds. A newbie arrived, so shapely and cordial A lady I knew not I was sure of it, As she asked for a bunch of yellow blossoms. This feeling was so hard to explain For yellow stands for many things Joy, gladness, friendship, Welcome Back, Remember me, or ”I care". Tommy, the shy one, tip toped inside, As usual he chose the lovely pink. It was his way to say thanks and hope That she will always believe in him. A couple of coral ones, how abrupt Peter was. He knew they meant desire never lasting love. I’d rather he never entered my oasis For all he deserved was arid sand not bliss. Martin was next, and how he beamed. It was love at first sight, said he. So I suggested as I knew, That a lavender rose would please her most. My friend Elise had made a coup. So I gave her a bunch of mixed flowerets. Peach for appreciation and white for purity. Wasn’t Elise delighted that day? It was almost time, needed to close shop. When the outside door opened for the last time. The lady I had seen early that day returned. “You did not like my flowers?” I asked. She nodded and then stuttering said: “My mum has died. Just one black rose please.” I don’t know why a tear trickled down my face.

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Date: 2/8/2021 9:32:00 PM
Your characters came to life in this one, and your empathy and compassion was so well understood also.
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Date: 2/7/2021 10:44:00 AM
This really brought a mixture of emotions to me. The flowers all with their special meanings and the surprise ending. Well Done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/6/2021 8:39:00 AM
WoW! Victor, You are such an amazing storyteller. Your expertise in followers was evident. It was a good story from to finish. A sad ending to a well-written poem-Alexis
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Date: 2/5/2021 10:29:00 PM
I loved your beautiful tale, with sadness at the end. The roses and their color meanings was fascinating.
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Date: 2/5/2021 10:02:00 PM
Now, I miss my mom too...
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Date: 2/5/2021 6:37:00 PM
You do know your customers just as you know your flowers. Simply a beautiful story with a sad ending. Yes, a brilliant piece indeed.
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Date: 2/5/2021 2:50:00 PM
You sure know your rose colors, Victor. I love the red ones but I adore lavender as well!!
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Date: 2/5/2021 10:15:00 AM
aww you are an amazing storyteller Victor such a moving poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/5/2021 6:29:00 AM
What a lovely story, Victor. Held me right to the end. A flower for every mood, knowing that sure is a worthwhile skill.
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Date: 2/5/2021 5:59:00 AM
You speak to their hearts in colors of roses. Wonderfully emotive write, Victor. Loved the way you told the story.
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Date: 2/5/2021 5:24:00 AM
You know your flowers Victor, a sad ending. Tom
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Date: 2/5/2021 4:42:00 AM
Lovely as always, dear poet! Some times one is enough to say what sweeps the heart of grief. God bless and have a lovely day!
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Date: 2/5/2021 4:25:00 AM
So sad, brilliantly done, Victor. I love the poem. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/5/2021 2:27:00 AM
A lovely story, Victor. Gooseflesh at its ending. I noticed you didn't use red roses in your telling. Those were for someone special. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 4:05:00 AM
;) That's so sweet
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/5/2021 2:31:00 AM
They were for my valentine. :)
Date: 2/5/2021 1:36:00 AM
- I know the language of the rose ... I'm not sure most men know this language :))) - A wonderful poem with a sad ending, Victor - Have a lovely Friday and weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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