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The Naked Truth -Sequel From Another Sequel

The Naked Truth -Sequel From Another Sequel they had just met sharing drinks at the bar his bedroom eyes looked at her from afar he wished to narrow the gap share his sweetness on tap she rained on his parade when he gave her sugar connie pachecho 3/31/17 Note-I know. I let this stew for awhile. I wanted to use she rained on his parade-this is like hitting the jackpot on a slot machine if you know what I mean.

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Date: 4/5/2017 2:53:00 AM
This is a well thought out worded lim, however the last line is out of meter....the word "Parade" causes it to stutter, needs to be a single Syllable word....and rethinking ....x
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