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The Naked Truth - Sequel From Another Sequel

The Naked Truth – Sequel From Another Sequel



he strutted around like a brute
crammed in a too tight bathing suit
but on its release
It weren’t no smooth peach
just a wrinkled piece of old fruit


©John G. Lawless
4/1/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/2/2017 7:00:00 PM
hahaha. GREAT job here. I notice lately Soupers are doing better with limericks!!
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Date: 4/1/2017 2:49:00 PM
ha ha ha great one John I have read some fabulous sequels to my original limerick:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/1/2017 11:55:00 AM
I resemble that!
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