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The Naked Man

I left the noisome crowd and entered Caabia. All was as before, save my own increased awareness. The village square a place of near earthly sight (the senses, don’t you see) Was veiled in powdered light beyond peace beyond quiet in total contrast to time’s deception. There was a motionless standing figure now distant I had not noticed before OR The person had not BEEN before (and before when I cannot say) Beneath salubrious trees a row of benches in the talcum grass the way ‘round this motionless figure AND a silent throng come out of their dwellings (the house doors stood open) a tower bell chiming (in my mind because there was a tower seen) a perfect pastoral village as before only NOW this mysterious distant presence I entered the scene and took a seat ‘neath the trees my feet on the talcum grass head in the powdered air And since the central subject did not speak I asked the one next me “Who is this presence?” “He is the naked man.” “What sayest this man?” “He says nothing.” “What does he do?” “He does nothing.” “Where does he go?” “He goes nowhere He is alone in Harmonia.” “Is he beautiful?” “No one can tell.” “What thinkest this man?” “He thinks of nothing.” “Can we approach this man?” “WE MAY NOT!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/8/2010 1:03:00 PM
This is really weird, Daver, but in a good way. It reminded me of the Emperor's clothes. Maybe they are seeing nothing, since they dont even know if he is beautiful. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 11/10/2009 3:00:00 PM
He was a lot about being within himself. Interesting write and very descriptive. I could feel the powdered air and talcum grass. Thanks for the comments on my poems. Sara
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Date: 10/29/2009 10:20:00 AM
Oooh, Daver! Awesome write! I see traces of the planes of existence that were in your novel in this write. So much to think about in the question and answer dialogue at the end. Another favorite for me from a fave writer! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 10/29/2009 10:01:00 AM
ANOTHER PROFOUND WRITE. I WOULD CALL HIM INVISIBLE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING, DAVE. HOPE YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL CRATIVE DAY. LOVE, LAINIE
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