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The Mythical River Beast

I watched it emerge from out of the fog, monumental in size, a sheer cliff face of steel moving pass me, almost quieter than my breath but for a whispered wake running from its bow. Something this big should have made more noise. A black hull bore scars of scrapings and rust bleeding out of fissures along its length. The fog seemed to oil its way, its shape looming large then slowly growing smaller as it slid down river until it dimmed and disappeared. In that moment its passage was a mystery, a brief apparition of something beyond the dimension of ordinary things. The quiet of its passing, the dark bulk and beauty of its presence was magnificent and overpowering. It was like a shadow cast by a mythical beast coalescing out of history, infiltrating the mind then dissolving once more into a place somewhere hidden in its magical past, suddenly brought back to this world with its registered port written in rusty lettering on its stern - MONROVIA

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Date: 4/6/2023 2:44:00 AM
Well this poem is more beautiful than anything I could find when I googled the muse. I don't know how you do this! This poem is amazing, so many layers to ponder and be consumed by. Obviously we have the ship, then the leviathan imagery but I'm utterly bowled over by the concept of the dark recesses of the mind imagery that almost takes you down and just as you stare in wonder at the moment of judgement you're spared. A fav - if ever an expression did not do something justice it's my last one.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/6/2023 6:09:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the ride down river, one of my favourite places, just a walk away from home. Deeply connected to riverscapes, ships etc as I also grew up in a similiar environment but in another city. They carry my mythmaking and in way, the pulse of identity. A little of that comes out in the poem which you have picked up on....perceptive.....thanks.
Date: 3/1/2023 8:18:00 PM
Yikes! Another entertaining read, Paul. I love imagination. We have no idea what a creative mind can come up with. Keep penning!
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/2/2023 3:08:00 PM
Daniel, you're too kind...thanks again for comments, appreciated. Imagination is a gift given us by the gods...without it we would be sorry prisoners of our own shadows and poetry would be lifeless. Cheers, Paul

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