The Mythical River Beast

I watched it emerge
from out of the fog, monumental
in size, a sheer cliff face of steel 
moving pass me, almost
quieter than my breath 
but for a whispered wake
running from its bow.
Something this big
should have made 
more noise.

A black hull bore scars 
of scrapings and rust bleeding out
of fissures along its length.
The fog seemed to oil its way,
its shape looming large
then slowly growing smaller 
as it slid down river until
it dimmed and disappeared.

In that moment its passage
was a mystery, a brief apparition
of something beyond the dimension 
of ordinary things. The quiet
of its passing, the dark bulk 
and beauty of its presence
was magnificent 
and overpowering.
It was like a shadow cast 
by a mythical beast
coalescing out of history,
infiltrating the mind then
dissolving once more
into a place somewhere
hidden in its magical past,
suddenly brought back
to this world 
with its registered port
written in rusty lettering
on its stern - MONROVIA
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Turner Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Yikes! Another entertaining read, Paul. I love imagination. We have no idea what a creative mind can come up with. Keep penning!
Willason Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Daniel, you're too kind...thanks again for comments, appreciated. Imagination is a gift given us by the gods...without it we would be sorry prisoners of our own shadows and poetry would be lifeless. Cheers, Paul
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