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The mystery of the intangible - Anacreontic Couplets

To look at light reflecting Chaos is intersecting Beautiful in it's allure Though interpretation poor Easy to misunderstand No eye to eye nor held hand

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/12/2024 6:23:00 PM

Dear Di11y Dally, congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest with your alluring poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/12/2024 11:08:00 PM

Thank you Susan, I appreciate your words of encouragement x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/3/2024 7:37:00 PM

Congratulations, Dolly Dally!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/4/2024 2:48:00 PM

Thank you x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2024 9:57:00 AM

I really like seeing all these little poems . Congrats being a winner. Well deserved

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/3/2024 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, it took me a while to get in the mode for this style for some reason, but nice to do once I had. Thank you for your kind words x

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2024 10:37:00 AM

Nicely done and correctly.. Intangible is beautiful as it is the result of our imaginations.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/1/2024 9:00:00 PM

“hot chocolate at Costa looking at the lights reflecting in the glass” ~ so that’s how you come up with such exquisite poems :) warmest congratulations on your win, DD, have a great year ahead

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/1/2024 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Silent One - I wrote this with a large hot chocolate at Costa looking at the lights reflecting in the glass :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/23/2023 4:22:00 PM

wow, this is an impressive write about the mystery of the intangible...you nailed it for sure! Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/24/2023 1:23:00 AM

I couldn't quite find my way with this form and that snuck into what I wrote I think. Thanks for your kind words x