The Mystery Of Destiny

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Unlocking the Mystery of Destiny - Cindy Trimm Ministries International

Destiny, oh destiny, why hide thyself from me. Come out, come out, for all to see. A life filled with struggle, then at last a surprise. Why not reveal now how I self-actualize? Have I no choice of my destination, How I’ll proceed in my maturation? How many ways could there be? Or outcomes to this mystery? More than one, surely a few, Leave some things to chance, it’s the least you should do. I want to have challenges and growth each day, A purposeful life as I travel my way. Life’s surely not over, with just destiny My soul longs to live for eternity.

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/7/2025 11:53:00 PM

Yeah!! Great title :-)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/7/2025 4:27:00 PM

I love how you began your Sonnet with a question...one many of us ask. Certainly the questions in the 2d verse most of us do ask. I appreciate the widsom in the last two lines. Sonnets are your forte. Du bist der Beste, hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:25:00 PM

Thanks for you continued support, my love. Bill