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April- 18- 2025
Write Twelve Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
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“The sea casts a magic spell with the ever- rising breakers and the melody, the clanking of waves produce. It amazes us with the wonders hiding within its caverns. Without drawing any boundary or barrier, it rushes to touch or submerge everything on its way”--- Quote by the Poet.
What engrossing feel overpowers me, As I loiter along the sandy strands of the sea. Waves whisper their goodbye as they recede back, Girdling the shore with a garland of foamy blooms. A zephyr comes tickling and tangling my hair Seaweeds sway back and forth as waters shoot up. Beneath the sand, when wavelets on my ankles kiss, Like a child, I long to jump into the wobbling mass. I let the water braid my hands, to savor its coolness. Though I don’t like its chaotic depths and crashing tides, In the music of waves, I enjoy a moment of unalloyed joy. The sea is indeed a sanctuary of never- ending epiphanies.

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Date: 4/21/2025 1:14:00 PM
Valsa, your amazing imagery never fails to inspire me. Your magnificent "The Music of Waves" was a pleasure to read. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/21/2025 7:12:00 AM
Your beautiful imagery always captures my heart Valsa. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/20/2025 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Music of Waves" write. I love the beach but none here. Great quote and picture. Happy/Blessed Easter Day......
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Date: 4/19/2025 6:47:00 AM
"garland of foamy blooms" -- Love that! "Beneath the sand, when wavelets on my ankles kiss," -- Great poetic expression! Superb writing throughout.
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Date: 4/18/2025 10:49:00 AM
Hello Valsa, Your poetry is beautiful. I love the sound of the waves. to me it is relaxing. it soothes tension. blessings my friend. Happy Easter. /Darlene/
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Date: 4/18/2025 10:47:00 AM
Nice poem. Visting sea and playing with waves is always fun.
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