Deb M Poet Rhyme

The Murphys

Pete and Poppy Murphy are empty nesters now
Their three darling spuds are all grown
All sprouted, independent and humble
Out in the big soil now on their own

Their  twins Bubble and Squeak are at university
Their oldest son Chip is a carpenter….who owns his own company
They are very proud of their three grown hot spuds
Who are grounded ,versatile, resilient and happy

Since retirement the Murphys have become couch potatoes
Lacking motivation,  feeling tired and baked
Their skin has become wrinkled with age spots
Their bodies have  bulged, sprouted new limbs that ached

‘We need to get out of this rut we are in Pete’, Poppy said
‘Get some sunshine….. but definitely not get fried’
‘Go out for a drink and perhaps get little smashed’ ,she laughed
‘You wear your jacket Pete’, ‘and you your purple dress ’ Pete replied

‘Perhaps you should catch up with a mate Pete’
‘You haven’t seen Hash Brown in a while’
‘I could spend the day with my lovely French friend….Francine Fries’
‘Later we could get down and a little crispy’ Pete said ….with a cheeky little smile!!

Agreeing it was definitely time to make lifestyle changes
Get motivated, exercise,  eat healthy is what they needed to do
Starting tomorrow they both readily  decided
So, let’s pop the T.V on now and watch “ Cooking With Taters” on channel two!!

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Gail Debole July 11, 2026 at 5:45 PM Love the potato theme all the way through including the ending when they decide to make such a BIG change in their lives...Clever writing. Deb M July 11, 2026 at 11:48 PM Hi Gail…..lovely to see you and thankyou for such a kind comment! Debx

Sara Kendrick July 10, 2026 at 12:33 PM I like this one for the creative thoughtful lines and yes, the humor. Way to go. Sara K. Deb M July 11, 2026 at 11:46 PM Thankyou so much Sara….so glad you enjoyed! Debx

Dorothy Gibbons July 9, 2026 at 12:18 PM Such a great write sure is creative sure is fun. Enjoyed reading this The Murphy Family saga is a great read hugs <3 Deb M July 9, 2026 at 12:21 PM Aww thanks Dorothy for such a lovely comment! Debx

sara Etgen-Baker July 8, 2026 at 4:46 PM this is hilarious and so creatively crafted...a delight to read....sending hugs, Sara Deb M July 9, 2026 at 5:23 AM So glad you appreciated the humour in this Sara….thankyou for always commenting….l do appreciate it! Debx

Paula Goldsmith July 8, 2026 at 1:24 PM "The Murphys" is a creative/fun ~ write/story. What a joy this was to read. Love It... Have a fun day writing away.......... Deb M July 9, 2026 at 5:21 AM Thankyou dear Paula for your kind words! Deb x

Daniel Henry Rodgers July 8, 2026 at 10:14 AM Dear Deb, this one’s pure fun, a family of spuds with more personality than most humans I know. I love how you keep the rhythm light and the humor affectionate, it’s a story that smiles at itself while still feeling oddly true. The Murphys may be tubers, but they’re wonderfully human. A clever, charming write and a joy to read. Blessings, Daniel Deb M July 9, 2026 at 5:21 AM Thankyou Daniel….always appreciate your lovely comments! Debx