The Moving Shadow

X X X the moving shadow a daddy with longest legs - hypnopompic web X X ////\\\\

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/29/2023 1:36:00 AM

Brilliant haiku. Your Thesaurus must be working overtime.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 5:22:00 AM

I’ve had this happen to me! So strange when you’re half asleep!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/28/2023 9:56:00 PM

An excellent haiku on an interesting topic, Kim. I was happy to learn a new word. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 5:23:00 AM

Thank you, Evelyn! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/28/2023 9:05:00 PM

Whoa! Creative to the max, Kim! And 'hypnopompic!' There's one for the ages... Wishing you a pleasurable hypnopompic stage before wake-up tomorrow! ~ Easing in to the day...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 5:23:00 AM

Thanks for the “pleasurable” because having to investigate a giant spider that is not there…lol!