John Freeman Poet Rhyme

The Mourn of Sacred

~I ’m blessed by my mourn…
        released from strife’s scorn…
             I am by grace comforted…
                  in Love‘s sacred kiss…
                       thus torn, I gain bliss…
                            my sorrow thus aborted...

~though death claims a face…
         mourn is sacred grace…
              alone by the throne, I find…
                   sorrow dissipates...
                        vacates, sacred gates...
                             sacred mourn is peace divine...

~death where is thy sting...
        borne of human fling...
             only thoughts by humans wrought... 
                  arise from disguise...
                       of human devise...
                            by mourn the sacred is sought 

                            For and in Honor of Nette Onclaud
                           “ALOUETTE, Your Cleansing rite
                            by John Moses Freeman

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Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 10:34 AM Congratulations on your placement in the "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud. CR

Shani Fassbender September 6, 2011 at 10:32 PM Well deserved placement in this contest. Very beautiful, flowing words...

Dr.Ram Mehta September 6, 2011 at 5:59 PM Contratulations on the win in the contest, JOHN

Tony Lane September 6, 2011 at 12:17 PM great work in the contest. Tony

Carol Sunshine Brown September 6, 2011 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Moses. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster September 6, 2011 at 5:06 AM Exquisite words with a meaningful message. well done John. regards Marg

Gwendolen Song September 6, 2011 at 12:53 AM John-What a spiritual write for Nette's contest. Congrats on this win..Best to you. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 5, 2011 at 5:57 PM CONGRATS MOSES ON YOUR EXCITING WIN WITH THIS OUTSTANDING POETRY ENTRY MY FRIEND... SUPERB AS EVER..LUV..

Nancy Jones September 5, 2011 at 4:41 PM Intriguing take on the contest, John.. beautifully done! Congrats! ~N

Lee Ramage September 5, 2011 at 3:55 PM Beautiful poem, so nice. Congrats Lee

Jack Horne September 5, 2011 at 3:50 PM Many congrats on all your wins, John - and thanks : )

David Williams September 5, 2011 at 3:20 PM hey john congrats on your great win, wonderful write..David

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2011 at 11:51 AM Good luck in the contest with this interesting work..I especially like the last stanza first two lines..We can cheat the grave of holding us through accepting the saving grace of Jesus..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks so much for the honor of placing in the winners' circle in your contest...Sara

Nette Onclaud August 29, 2011 at 10:24 AM i like this and thanks for joining; will give a final run-through come judging time, moe.. thanks for appreciating my piece in your last contest..ohh, i am still evolving but hopefully faster than a chimp, lol!.. because i, and you, have a soul?? :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta August 28, 2011 at 4:20 PM Wonderful write and entry, enjoyed it, John