The Moth


The moon shines brightly on my wooden porch,
as shadows dance from trees swayed by the breeze.
Alone, I sit beneath the glowing torch-
shaped light, relaxed, and feeling much at ease.

Above, an open window on the right
and wind-swept curtains catch my eye, and so
a flicker came in view so near the light.
Alone, a moth is drawn inside the glow.

I wondered why a moth is drawn to flame.
Why does the mystery of light attract
the need to endlessly pursue the game
of fluttered wings that seem to interact,

like overwhelming magnets to light’s beam,
into a world of some eternity?
It seems to sense a mystery unseen
beyond the brilliant rays that it can see.

I turned to view the moon up in the sky,
a peaceful light to which I’m lured to know
what mysteries exist beyond my eye.
Alone, my soul is drawn inside the glow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Great ending stanza Sandra..Congrats on your win
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you again, Joseph, for your encouraging comment and congratulations. Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Well-written, very thought provoking, Sandra Congrats on your win! Janice
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you once again, Janice, for your visit and so supportive comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 7:11 AM
This is lovely, Sandra. I like your observation of the moth, and the parallel you draw to you watching the moon. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Thank you once again, Agnes. I love metaphors! I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 6:50 AM
A delight to read this again many congrats Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Thanks for stopping by to read it again, and for your congrats. Much appreciated, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 12:37 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Sandra!
Haight Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma. So nice of you to stop by with our nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 6:55 PM
The flapping of the moth around the lights is kind of hypnotizing to me.The angle to the light source changes as a moth flies by since it isn't natural light. This confuses the poor thing. Congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Hi Eve, poor confused moth...didn't know this. Thank you for stopping by with your congrats! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Konos Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Love your poem it wouldn't be all that good if it were not Sandra...was great to see you back.....a while now...but still....
Haight Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Hi Judy, thanks for your visit and nice comment, and for your welcome back. Having a little more time to spend here now, but not as much as I'd like! Thanks again, hugs, Sandra
Y. Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 4:08 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis. I truly appreciate your visits and support. Hugs, Sandra
Reams Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Congrats on your first place win Sandra!
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Thanks for the visit to my page..I am sorry to be so long in responding back..Life has been a little different lately..Sara..Congrats on this win..
Haight Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 2:53 PM
Thank you again, Sara, for taking time to stop by with your congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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November 19, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Congratulations on your win with this amazing poem Sandra. I can't believe I missed this. 7
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Hi Brenda, thank you so much. It was fun to work on. Was gone all day- a lot of PS comments and replies to catch up on! Hugs, Sandra
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November 18, 2014 at 6:34 PM
Congrats, Sandra, on your win with this beautiful poem! Hugs, Rhonda
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Thank you so much, Rhonda. It was nice of you to stop by with your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 12:15 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:08 PM
H Jan, thanks so much! Hugs, Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 9:15 PM
Congratulations Sandra on your win. This is a fav for me.
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:09 PM
Maurice, thank you once more for your kind support. Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..We are drawn to light as well as the moth..I do wonder why?..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Hi Sara, you're welcome, and thank you for your supportive comment on my poem. Sandra
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November 3, 2014 at 5:32 PM
You've done justice to your pen as always, Sandra. My very favorite line is...your last one. Nice one! Enjoyed your poem! Good luck in the contest! ;) xxxx D.
Haight Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Hi Dorian, thank you so much for your nice comment and best wishes for the contest. So happy you like my poem.
Richards Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 5:31 PM
I love the connection between the moon and your eye......and the moth to the light! What a wonderful poem...I am sure this will do well ....just what Craig is looking for!!
Haight Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Thank you, Carrie, I really appreciate your feedback and encouraging comments. Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 5:18 PM
wonderful imagery and rhyme Sandra and you have excelled in covering all the elements for the contest - good luck I hope this does well for you:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Thank you, Jan. It was fun to work on for sure. I always appreciate your nice comments and well wishes. Hugs, Sandra
Meade Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 5:14 PM
The unseen is more of a reality then what we can see and touch! Great poem!
Haight Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Thank you for stopping by, David, and for your nice comment. Sandra
Nance Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Wow, what a great form, what a great creation, you are putting in all the ingredients and coming out with a masterpiece. well done
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 5:01 PM
Hello Casarah, thanks for stopping by with your encouraging comment! Sandra
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