The Motel Goodrest

With plates and words in anger flying
My wife and I now deem it best
To cease all our screaming and crying
As I check into the Motel Goodrest

I arrive and plop down for a blissful night
But for two hours a car’s engine revs; varoom!
Above me screeching shouts; a lover’s fight
And the loud thumping of the bed in the next room

A frantic eeeouu; a cayote cat snack?
Now the zzz-zzz of a neon sign on the blink
If I had any brains I’d start to pack!
But I sigh aaah; into slumber I sink

Sun shines through the drapes and onto the wall
There’s splish-splashing in the motel pool
It was a calm, restful night after all
Yipee! Now everything’s cool!

I hear a loud clomp-clomp; what now?
There’s a moo so low and mournful
Through the window peers the eyes of a cow
Looking a bit weary and scornful

I pack and flee as if for my life
Passing the cow whose bell clangs and claps
I check out and meekly return to my wife
And spend the weekend taking naps

7/22/22
Written in Onomatopoeia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 1:25 PM
Loved the humor, Robert. We all need a little light poetry from time to time. Have a great week! Bill
Tor Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 10:40 PM
The humor and rhyme at its very best Robert completely enjoyed my friend...
Gorelick Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 3:00 PM
Whenever I can put a smile on a face, my mission has been accomplished and my day bright! Thank you, Robert
Anaya Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 1:50 PM
I'm faving it! Clever beyond words, it's a SMASH, pure dynamite POW! Good luck in Robert, in this ROARING contest! ~Anaya
Gorelick Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, Anaya for your fave! I'm very appreciative. Robert
Wolf Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 8:30 PM
As cute and clever as can be, Robert. Thoroughly enjoyable! Thanks, gw
Gorelick Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 11:08 AM
We'll keep the light on for ya!
Hankins Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Boy, I'd say it would have been less noisy at home! Perhaps; perhaps not. Well, at least you wouldn't have had the splish-splashing in the motel pool, I suppose embellished with cries of "Marco Polo!"
Gorelick Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 1:45 PM
As a kid I used to love to stay in one, especially when we went across the country to New York. Things were different!
Calasibetta Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 4:08 PM
Your imagery definitely depicts the horrors of a motel…..very funny and good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
Gorelick Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 1:43 PM
Motels sure can be entertaining, glad you enjoyed Paulette! Thank you, Robert
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