The Morning Shower

The water, hot and steaming,

   Cascades over our bodies.

Freshly lathered flesh meets flesh

  ...morning seduction.






for Michael Falotico's "Spicy" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/24/2011 9:31:00 PM
Big congratulations, Francine on your first place in Michael's contest, " Spicy " contest. May you have many more in the near future. Peace and love, Andrew.
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Date: 1/24/2011 1:22:00 PM
Hello Francine, Congratulations on your Number 1 win! This is wonderful... As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/23/2011 3:50:00 PM
A late Congratulation~ Francine~on your #1 win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:01:00 PM
Fantastic Francine, a wonderful win.
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations Francine, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 6:22:00 AM
Hot hot hot! Nice win! Light & Love
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:32:00 PM
hot hot hot. Many wonderful congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/22/2011 1:18:00 PM
This is well deserved, oh spicy one! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/22/2011 9:24:00 AM
a super topper, francine.. KUDOS to you! :)huggs, nette
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Date: 1/22/2011 8:54:00 AM
A passionate morning indeed Francine :) Congratulations on your awesome win
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:32:00 AM
Wahoo, Francine! Congratulations !!!
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest..Very passionate work....Sara
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:01:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your first place win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful entry luv..
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Date: 1/22/2011 5:50:00 AM
Congrats on 1st in my first contest...thank you so much!!! luv Michael
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Date: 1/22/2011 5:50:00 AM
Hi Francine - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/8/2011 10:50:00 PM
Hot ...WOW! nice poem....Jimmy
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Date: 1/8/2011 3:48:00 PM
Save water, shower with a friend. You certainly have a knack for describing a good time.
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Date: 12/31/2010 10:01:00 AM
Darn, our snow has gone, nothing cold for me to dive into. Sizzling, all the way from Nanaimo. Good luck in the contest Francine....:)
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Date: 12/31/2010 4:39:00 AM
Very romantic and spicy write on the morning seduction. Good luck in the contest and happy new year, Francine
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Date: 12/31/2010 2:57:00 AM
hot, hotter.. hottest!! beautiful seductive piece, francine.. best winning luck in frank's contest! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:24:00 PM
wow, Francine ,this is SPICY. Sure fire winner in MY BOOK. LUv ,Andrea
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