The Morning Shower

The water, hot and steaming,

   Cascades over our bodies.

Freshly lathered flesh meets flesh

  ...morning seduction.






for Michael Falotico's "Spicy" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Crisci Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 9:31 PM
Big congratulations, Francine on your first place in Michael's contest, " Spicy " contest. May you have many more in the near future. Peace and love, Andrew.
Ruebel Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Hello Francine, Congratulations on your Number 1 win! This is wonderful... As Always, Shar
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January 23, 2011 at 3:50 PM
A late Congratulation~ Francine~on your #1 win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.
Laan Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Fantastic Francine, a wonderful win.
Brown Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations Francine, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Hot hot hot! Nice win! Light & Love
Mannan Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 7:32 PM
hot hot hot. Many wonderful congratulations for this win.
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:18 PM
This is well deserved, oh spicy one! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Onclaud Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 9:24 AM
a super topper, francine.. KUDOS to you! :)huggs, nette
Neels Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 8:54 AM
A passionate morning indeed Francine :) Congratulations on your awesome win
Richards Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Wahoo, Francine! Congratulations !!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest..Very passionate work....Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Congrats Francine on your first place win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful entry luv..
Calhoun Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Hi Francine - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC
Falotico Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Congrats on 1st in my first contest...thank you so much!!! luv Michael
Anderson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Hot ...WOW! nice poem....Jimmy
Pettit Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Save water, shower with a friend. You certainly have a knack for describing a good time.
Fraser Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Darn, our snow has gone, nothing cold for me to dive into. Sizzling, all the way from Nanaimo. Good luck in the contest Francine....:)
Mehta Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 4:39 AM
Very romantic and spicy write on the morning seduction. Good luck in the contest and happy new year, Francine
Onclaud Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 2:57 AM
hot, hotter.. hottest!! beautiful seductive piece, francine.. best winning luck in frank's contest! huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 9:24 PM
wow, Francine ,this is SPICY. Sure fire winner in MY BOOK. LUv ,Andrea
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