The More - the Less

The more skin you can see the less sexy she be The more flesh she is baring the less room for daring

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/17/2022 2:11:00 AM

I always say that too much skin compels some to think the worst and ruins all surprises for others.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 3/16/2022 6:31:00 PM

No Mystery...

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/16/2022 11:52:00 AM

Even Eve's leaf was a completely unnecessary accoutrement interfering with SOP . . . .

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/16/2022 11:27:00 AM

I think it nice to leave some things to the imagination, other wise what would be the purpose, if there is no mystery left, nicely penned Gershon

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/16/2022 10:02:00 AM

This is exceptional. I prefer a nicely dressed person.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2022 8:03:00 PM

Me, too. When there's nothing left to hide, there's no sense of wonder... :) gw

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/16/2022 6:25:00 AM

So true GW, The mystery and imagination are much more intriguing!! Well done! Happy Wednesday in Chicago!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2022 7:31:00 PM

Yes. Ha, ha, ha! At least the girls I dated fell for that line. ~ gw

John Lawless

Date: 3/16/2022 3:43:00 AM

Enough with the show and tell....bring on the dancing bares.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2022 7:28:00 PM

I've two tickets for the circus, John. Uh, er, do you happen to have a wayback machine?!

Anselmo Boles

Date: 3/16/2022 2:01:00 AM

You sound like a seasoned pro regarding the subject, Maestro! Lol...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2022 7:26:00 PM

I wish I were a 'seasoned pro,' Anselmo. Fact is, with my x-ray vision, I can see whatever I want, whenever I want. No 'air of mystery' for my eyes. ~ Superman