The Moon Looked Like a Cat Burglar

The moon looked like a cat burglar that crisp November night;
clear skies but for one dark band splashed across his sight. 
His guise arcane and sinister, and try hard as I might, 
I couldn't help but wonder who he'd prey upon with spite. 

An air of eerie stillness fell, as he cast cool silver light, 
foretelling of his felony, contriving someone's cruel plight. 
His luminance trespassed the land as he rose to his full height; 
a meticulous surveillance to plan his act of sleight. 

Disquieted I crept inside, closed the door, pulled curtains tight, 
still his glow transuded every room setting all my fears alight. 
Adrenalin took over, but far too scared to fight, 
I sheltered 'neath the duvet to wait for morning bright. 

Next morn I tiptoed down the stairs, fists clenched, my knuckles white, 
but everything was in its place, the moon had taken flight. 
I don't know why he visited, maybe just to be polite, 
but I had uneasy feelings he'd return at next twilight.


**for 'Monorhyme Madness'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/8/2010 7:09:00 AM
Oh, how delightful , the way you ended this with an uneasiness it would happen again! GREAT personification (or would I say animalization. haha) I really enjoy your mature monorhyming, Sharon. You are a joy to read. If only I had more time to spare here at Soup. Sorry my time is so limited recently, or I'd surely read more of your poetry. LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/7/2010 2:35:00 PM
Another Gem from Miss Tideswell's pen. I shall look at the moon with a different perspective now Sharon. Good luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:36:00 PM
btw--that sure is one fine name for a kennel :) I'd be drawn to it too :)!! enjoy your day now & hugs!! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/6/2010 2:18:00 PM
This is one unforgettable moon poem & such a fun and witty monorhyme, super glad you entered this in the contest Sharon :)--really loved how this flowed too :) and I still can't help but think that this "moon that looked like a cat burglar" has that Chesire grin about him ;) & yup, Sijo has taken hold of me at the moment--I think it's thinking of the twists that really hooked me...it's really an enjoyable form and I'm sure you'd do great with it :D!--nikko :)
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Date: 6/6/2010 10:51:00 AM
loved it!!, good luck on the contest
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Date: 6/6/2010 10:22:00 AM
Interesting and uncanny, I was thinking of one abount the moon but on a different line. Think i thow the thought back into the sea of my mind and recast my line. Nice work Sharon. Love Roger xx
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Date: 6/6/2010 9:36:00 AM
Very Good monorhyme Sharon....it will be hard to beat.....Good Luck in the contest.....Larry
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Date: 6/6/2010 9:35:00 AM
Nice rhyming. Wish you good luck in the contest
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