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The Moon As Witness

My star, dear love of my life Forever your man, my wife We seal each night with a kiss Renew our vow for days of bliss Submitted on February 13, 2018 for contest ROMANTIC CHARM IN 4 LINES sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 3RD

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Gary Smith

Date: 2/18/2018 3:11:00 PM

Lovely poem Line, congrats :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2018 3:54:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Gary.

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/18/2018 8:06:00 AM

Line, congratulations, an honour for me to be on the podium with you... Mick

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2018 9:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mick. Right back at you. Line xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2018 6:36:00 PM

Congrats on this one, LIne. It is just as sweet as first time I read it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2018 7:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2018 12:16:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Line :) - Congratulations on your win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Always appreciate your visits and comments.

Silent One

Date: 2/14/2018 9:06:00 AM

Sweet memories Line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, SO. Most appreciated. Love your contests.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/14/2018 8:37:00 AM

So sweet--well-done, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2018 10:32:00 PM

Great 4 liner, Line, I don't think mine feels the requirements , but I'm hoping .Good Luck Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2018 7:39:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Eve. Always appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/13/2018 9:40:00 PM

Like that final line! Not renew our vows but instead renew our vow for days of bliss! Very nice!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 10:23:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Kim.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/13/2018 8:39:00 PM

This is a beautiful sweet write for the contest Line; Good luck in it!~Che :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:21:00 PM

Thank you, Cheryl. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Akkina Downing

Date: 2/13/2018 8:35:00 PM

Oh how sweet this one... good luck in the contest Lin! Hugs and smiles :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:21:00 PM

Thanks, Akkina. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/13/2018 7:36:00 PM

love the honest kiss in this LIne beautiful write , good luck in the contest :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, Lewis. Appreciate your visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2018 5:37:00 PM

Beautiful one, LIne! Can't wait to try this one myself!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Have fun!

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/13/2018 12:28:00 PM

This is indeed very romantic, Line and I great entry for the contest, Love it xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, Mike. Most appreciated.