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Poetry/Imagism/The Moon and Stars
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1673-884-13
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, September 13, 2024
For the International Contests, Bite Size No 90 
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 09/20/2024

The Moon and Stars

There was a chill in the Fall night_
as I walked about my neighborhood,
and up above the full moon was an orange ball,
in the ink black sky watching me.
And sparkling here and there, everywhere were stars,
twinkling like precious little diamonds.
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Dutta Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 2:27 AM
Gone through your poem. ‘ll try, though I am unable to satisfy you. Have Good Days.
La France Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Anisha, looking forward to reading your poem for my contest, Constance
George Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 9:55 PM
Beautiful and lucid images that stand out. I enjoyed reading your poem, dear Constance.
La France Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 5:02 AM
Valsa, thank you for the compliment an for comment, Constance
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 11:25 PM
Thanks for the beautiful example. This contest should fill quickly!
La France Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment, I agree, already I have some beautiful poems, Constance
Woods Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 7:15 AM
Great images and example for contest! Xo
La France Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Crystol, thank you for the compliment, Constance
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 6:37 PM
Very nice read! The last line is great!
La France Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 8:00 PM
Abdullah, thank you for the compliment and comment, Constance
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