Get Your Premium Membership

The Moon and Stars

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Poetry/Imagism/The Moon and Stars
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1673-884-13
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
Copying any part of this work is prohibited without permission.

Written, September 13, 2024
For the International Contests, Bite Size No 90 
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 09/20/2024

There was a chill in the Fall night_ as I walked about my neighborhood, and up above the full moon was an orange ball, in the ink black sky watching me. And sparkling here and there, everywhere were stars, twinkling like precious little diamonds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/23/2024 2:27:00 AM
Gone through your poem. ‘ll try, though I am unable to satisfy you. Have Good Days.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:12:00 PM
Anisha, looking forward to reading your poem for my contest, Constance
Date: 9/17/2024 9:55:00 PM
Beautiful and lucid images that stand out. I enjoyed reading your poem, dear Constance.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 9/18/2024 5:02:00 AM
Valsa, thank you for the compliment an for comment, Constance
Date: 9/16/2024 11:25:00 PM
Thanks for the beautiful example. This contest should fill quickly!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2024 4:54:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment, I agree, already I have some beautiful poems, Constance
Date: 9/16/2024 7:15:00 AM
Great images and example for contest! Xo
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2024 4:54:00 AM
Crystol, thank you for the compliment, Constance
Date: 9/14/2024 6:37:00 PM
Very nice read! The last line is great!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2024 8:00:00 PM
Abdullah, thank you for the compliment and comment, Constance

Book: Reflection on the Important Things