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The Moon

Late evening. I have put aside a book and prefer to wander the freedom of a darkened room, drift through a window into a framed sky where a bright moon writes itself across the pages of passing clouds. It's an easy drift, letting go like a book dropping from hands when loosened by sleep, lifting up weightless into somewhere else. For the moment I like it here - the quiet, the way everything gently knits together, the play of images cast upon the walls of my room. I have spent too much of my life here, always finding it hard to tell where my mind ends and where the world begins. Childhood still sleepwalks the passageways looking for a way out. Old age wanders the vast territories of this familiar room. I have become the moon, writing myself across the pages of what is passing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/3/2023 3:34:00 PM
The moon is so distant yet present. Your words reflect for me this dichotomy as you describe your own presence. Beautiful imagery and poetry.
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Date: 6/1/2023 5:30:00 PM
Intriguing poetry, Paul. Itrvel in my mind throughout the universe at times. I enjoy your poetry, I'll be adding you to my poets I follow list. Have a great June! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/1/2023 9:25:00 PM
Good to hear from you Bill. Many thanks for your comments and for your support. Appreciated. Should imagine it would be warming up in Texas...reverse is the case here...winter.
Date: 6/1/2023 3:15:00 AM
- A truly beautiful poem, Paul ... I flow into this experience ... a little back and forth in the year that has passed ... and moon is a companion -
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/1/2023 2:57:00 PM
Thankyou Ann-Lise for your comments. Very much appreciate the time you spent with the poem and your kind words. Regards, Paul
Date: 5/31/2023 7:47:00 AM
You are an artist Paul, beautiful once again but different enough to completely captivate. Having fell asleep in a few locations recently due to not sleeping at night, I recognise that soft pull into a dreamscape. Then the beautiful introspective follow up. Exquisite indeed!
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 9/3/2023 3:27:00 PM
I agree DD
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/31/2023 10:26:00 PM
Thanks DD for very supportive comments ...pleased that the poem connected...appreciate yr words.

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