The Moon

Late evening.
I have put aside a book 
and prefer to wander
the freedom of a darkened room, 
drift through a window
into a framed sky
where a bright moon writes
itself across the pages 
of passing clouds.

It's an easy drift, 
letting go like a book dropping
from hands when loosened
by sleep, lifting up weightless
into somewhere else.
For the moment I like it here - 
the quiet, the way everything 
gently knits together,
the play of images cast
upon the walls of my room.

I have spent too much
of my life here, always 
finding it hard to tell where 
my mind ends and where
the world begins. 
Childhood still sleepwalks 
the passageways looking
for a way out. Old age
wanders the vast territories 
of this familiar room.
I have become the moon, 
writing myself across 
the pages of what is passing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/3/2023 3:34:00 PM
The moon is so distant yet present. Your words reflect for me this dichotomy as you describe your own presence. Beautiful imagery and poetry.
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Date: 6/1/2023 5:30:00 PM
Intriguing poetry, Paul. Itrvel in my mind throughout the universe at times. I enjoy your poetry, I'll be adding you to my poets I follow list. Have a great June! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/1/2023 9:25:00 PM
Good to hear from you Bill. Many thanks for your comments and for your support. Appreciated. Should imagine it would be warming up in Texas...reverse is the case here...winter.
Date: 6/1/2023 3:15:00 AM
- A truly beautiful poem, Paul ... I flow into this experience ... a little back and forth in the year that has passed ... and moon is a companion -
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Date: 6/1/2023 2:57:00 PM
Thankyou Ann-Lise for your comments. Very much appreciate the time you spent with the poem and your kind words. Regards, Paul
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