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The Moon, the Swan, the Rose

The Moon, The Swan, The Rose I see an enchanted image that you’ve never dreamed of With reflections twinkling while dancing on wave drops Of a dreamy blue lake that is a mirror of one white swan A dancing beauty with a pureness that blesses this water She floats like a princess with such an elegance and grace As splendor ripples through a lens of her divine existence A canvas painting as one masterpiece beyond compare As the moonlight manifests a sweet rose in my dreams Beautiful to desire now that nothing shall be disturbed Within a frozen memory a brilliant diamond illuminates As the full moon’s image enters the depths of her soul And a sad, certain loneliness leaves her spirit exhausted Arising before my eyes on the wings of angels I see all Clearly now with an excited, fluttering magical heartbeat Believe me—that this eternal blue sky is incredibly real With a golden orb of light colors reflecting so exquisitely Now as majestic images of God’s Heaven appear above I see His very image of the Moon, the Swan, and the Rose Anne-Lise Andresen, Gary Bateman, and Liam McDaid A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved September 2, 2015 (Unrhymed Tercet)

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Date: 9/16/2015 8:11:00 PM
Three poets that dance so very well together! Super 7 on this one my friends. Quite impressive even if it didn't rhyme!
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:34:00 PM
Gary Anne Lise and Liam yet another wonderful collaboration - the imagery is divine:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 9/14/2015 12:04:00 PM
- A perfect picture of nature .... could read it every day :) - Thank you Liam and Gary! - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2015 12:00:00 PM
Hi Liam, Anne- Lise n' Gary!Another very beautiful romantic,captivating love poem written by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Excellent!A true golden gem!I truly enjoyed it.A very beautiful,romantic, dreamy, sweet n' enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just awesome!I love it!Great imagery.Very beautiful collaboration!Very wonderful team work.A 7 to each!A Fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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