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The Moment Between

There was a moment when the afternoon seemed to pause as if it was holding its breath, suspended briefly between the letting go and the drawing in. Thoughts came to a rest and the wind which had before played in the folds of a curtain, was suddenly still. If it had remained like this for a while longer, I could have glimpsed what was hiding there in that stillness, heard what was weaved through the strands of silence which had intersected my existence, there in that moment, before time drew its breath again and I fell back into myself, back into movement and noise. Now, I am not even sure if it matters.

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Date: 4/2/2023 10:58:00 PM
So interesting and engaging an idea. I also like the idea reinforced for me that seeing all this back catalogue brilliance without comments represents a confidence you have, a truth that comments aren't representative of quality and that idea that art (and people) have their resonance and some might be into flower and religion poems but it doesn't mean recesses of the mind isn't great - they just need the right audience. I'm too dependent on acknowledgement for my own good, so good lesson for me
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/3/2023 6:05:00 AM
So kind in your comments. I write poetry to keep my mind together and connected to life. Of course it's good to have readers following yr work but I would still write if I had no one. Poetry is the only way I can focuss my thoughts and feelings and make sense of the world. I indeed appreciate your support.

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