The Moment Attained

Success is most elusive the moment attained What once beckoned so brightly all glamor's been drained

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/7/2021 3:48:00 AM

It does not seem to last long, that is for sure!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/5/2021 11:41:00 AM

Damn street lights everywhere . . . . .one right after the other . . . .

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/6/2021 2:52:00 PM

Can you imagine?! Let there be darkness!! Smiles, gw

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/5/2021 6:54:00 AM

I'm getting the message GW. Success is every day that I wake up!! Happy Successful Sunday!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/5/2021 3:35:00 PM

There you go, Mike. I like how you read this one... And I agree: Every day we wake up, success has been attained. All the rest is gravy. Let's keep wakin' up, my friend ('til the end, anyway). ~ J. Morrison

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/5/2021 5:47:00 AM

We must live in our moments not just the one attained. We learn this after a time.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/5/2021 2:58:00 AM

But we should never give up trying. Tom