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The moment - tanka 2 contest

Green grass stroke the skin 
Touching feeling the moment 
Hearts flying skyward seeking 
Crescendo of song .... 
You without sin shall forgive. 

Penned 17 March 2015 

Tanka 2. 5-7-7-5-7

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 3/30/2015 10:26:00 AM
Seren.. A terrific tanka and a well deserved winner!
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Date: 3/23/2015 1:37:00 PM
Seren, congratulations on your win for your Tanka! Sandra
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Date: 3/22/2015 1:57:00 PM
SEREN, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/21/2015 10:14:00 PM
This is a brilliant tanka, you know it would of placed higher other than the typo. Personally I stick my tongue out and plea poetic license! This is a fav for me.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/21/2015 11:23:00 PM
Oh Maurice its a typo , yet am pleased it was thought of as being good.....Seren
Date: 3/21/2015 9:31:00 PM
This was very interesting and I like how you kind of gave a twist to the old "you without sin throw the first stone." Did you mean green grass "strokes" the skin? I am such a stickler for things like that, or this would have scored higher!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/21/2015 9:41:00 PM
thank you Andrea looks like i made a typo, ahh well thank you for placing me anyway.....Seren
Date: 3/17/2015 6:02:00 AM
Lovely. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/17/2015 2:45:00 AM
Beautifully penned Seren Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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