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The Mockingbird

I recognize a tune from album of your songs And listen intently to impressionist sounds As you hop scotch from branch to branch Like a child all excited, frolicking in playground Peeking from behind shamrock green leaves Singing of love in blossoms of dogwood tree, As you tease a female, flapping your round wings Showing off white patches, revealing breasts Pointing curved beak to articulate a message In verses of romance, courting your soul mate Inviting her to celebrate the visions of spring. A prolific singer, you mimic songs of blue jays, Woof-woof of dogs, and croaks of hiding frogs, Wailing screams of sirens on ambulance moving fast And hasty beeping shrills of my alarm clock; Reserving your very best for ardent mating calls Choreographing dance-moves fit for wedding halls As you seduce a female on youthful virgin date, Aspiring to one more voice, one more etiquette Adding to repertoire another song of desires Pursuing next newness, next chase to happiness. June 30, 2019 Placed 4th:Pick a title, volume 6, personification contest by Edward Ibeh Title chosen--The Mockingbird HM: Strand choice 3 contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/3/2022 3:39:00 AM
Simply amazing ! I am swept off my feet by the beauty of your imagery."As you hop scotch from branch to branch Like a child all excited, frolicking in playground"....What apt comparison. Thanks for the delight you give each time.
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Date: 11/17/2020 1:58:00 PM
Birds are so interesting to watch. A wonderful write, Vijay :)
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Date: 8/2/2019 8:42:00 AM
What a lovely way to start my day.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2019 3:17:00 PM
Much appreciate--many thanks, Richard.
Date: 8/2/2019 6:04:00 AM
I see this poem has been very popular. It's a very entertaining one. I see a congrats. So it looks like it was a win. Good for u!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2019 3:17:00 PM
Many thanks, Andrea.
Date: 7/28/2019 6:46:00 PM
Really enjoyed this, such good descriptive work eally nicely done. some good rhyming as well.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/28/2019 7:32:00 PM
Much appreciate Linda--many thanks.
Date: 7/27/2019 6:49:00 PM
you're back ... and with a brilliant work that defines your style, vijay... very nice!..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/28/2019 7:31:00 PM
Much appreciate, Nette..many thanks.
Date: 7/27/2019 6:48:00 AM
You did this very well, described the mockingbird very well..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2019 3:03:00 PM
Much appreciate, SO--many thanks.
Date: 7/27/2019 1:54:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed your delightful poem with engaging imagery and wording! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2019 3:02:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and the kind remarks CayCay..much appreciate.
Date: 7/26/2019 3:27:00 PM
- Such flirtation could make any young virgin blush and her heart beat ... a beautiful winning poems Vijay ... congratulations :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2019 3:02:00 PM
Very kind of you Ann-Lise..many thanks.
Date: 7/26/2019 10:44:00 AM
courting your soul... lovely words.. just lovely.. Ann
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2019 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Ann..much appreciate.
Date: 7/25/2019 6:57:00 PM
A cute personification certainly person-like.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/26/2019 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Date: 7/25/2019 3:11:00 PM
The mockingbird is a prolific talker/singer, Vijay, while you are a prolific writer! Excellent personification. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/25/2019 4:20:00 PM
You are so kind my friend--much appreciate ..many thanks. Regards.
Date: 7/25/2019 12:34:00 PM
Such a sweet poem Vijay! Great description of the vivacity of the mocking bird! Loved reading it! -Smita
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/25/2019 2:46:00 PM
So very kind of you Smita..much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 7/24/2019 7:55:00 PM
Hi Vijay: Love your Mocking bird poem, Very descriptive. Hugs, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/25/2019 2:46:00 PM
Thank you SuZ..much appreciate.
Date: 7/24/2019 12:39:00 PM
This is so beautifully written Vijay. Great imagery and so descriptive. I now know more about the mockingbird. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/25/2019 2:45:00 PM
You are so kind..much appreciate Sandra..many thanks.
Date: 7/24/2019 6:41:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win, Vijay.. I enjoyed your Magnifient personification.. You penned it smoothly !! Well described and imagery is excellent.. Have a blessed day, my friend..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:28:00 AM
Much appreciate Robertina..many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 7/23/2019 10:37:00 AM
Exceptional poetry my friend.. A. Fav...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:28:00 AM
An honor to read your comments, Robert..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 7/20/2019 8:13:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay, on this win!! :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:27:00 AM
Much appreciate the return visit--many thanks, Brandy.
Date: 7/20/2019 11:26:00 AM
A wonderful poem with amazing imagery, Vijay:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Edward..much appreciate.
Date: 7/9/2019 5:35:00 PM
This is so amazingly colorful in imagery. Beautiful, smooth pen.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:26:00 AM
Much appreciate MLK..many thanks.
Date: 7/3/2019 2:09:00 PM
Such an awesome poem Vijay - a mocking bird, true to its name, mimicking sounds, but reserving his best dance, verse and plumage for an ardent love! This I certainly will fav. Such an amazing imagination you have have Vijay - kudos dear friend. Hugs Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:26:00 AM
Delighted by your feedback my friend..many thanks, Jennifer. And special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 7/2/2019 12:12:00 AM
This was delightful Vijay! I love to watch the mating dances of birds they are so entertaining. Birds are very intelligent. My daughter has an African grey parrot that knows over a thousand words. He always says good morning or good night at the proper hour. xxoo : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:25:00 AM
A joy it must be to hear the parrot every day..much enjoyed reading your comment Connie..many thanks.
Date: 7/1/2019 6:16:00 PM
You write meticulously in depth.. You depict in beauty the spirit of Nature.. decoding in an amazing poetry the language of birds! Weaving a poetic personification that lends itself to many layers of readings.. Always an honour to read up to you, dear Vijay, as you always raise your poetry above the norm and the expected.. another fave for its beauty! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:23:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your analysis..much appreciate Besma..many thanks. And special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 7/1/2019 3:28:00 PM
Beautifully written Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2019 8:22:00 AM
Much appreciate Joseph..many thanks.
Date: 7/1/2019 7:18:00 AM
Hi Vijay, You've penned such a well written write. Good content and imagery. I wish you best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/1/2019 7:34:00 AM
Haven't seen your poems in a while Alexis..much appreciate your visit and cheerful comments..many thanks.
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