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The Mockingbird

I wish I was a mockingbird perched high up in a tree. My trills by all would soon be heard; You’d come away with me. We’d soar up high above the lands, way up among the clouds. Without a care for life’s demands away from all the crowds. We’d gather twigs and build our nest so we could raise our brood. We’d teach them always be their best, with mankind not to feud. I wish I was a mockingbird; I’d sing my lullaby. My songs and words would ne’er be blurred; my rhymes would all apply. May 5, 2018 Contest: I Wish I Was a... Sponsor: Viv Wigley

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Date: 5/7/2018 5:18:00 PM
WAy to go, John. So glad to see this with a win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate it so much. John
Date: 5/7/2018 12:48:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan, I appreciate it. Be sure to check out my response to Lin's limerick :) John
Date: 5/7/2018 12:02:00 PM
Well done, John, a nice choice of subject and a lovely pen. Regards, Viv
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thanks, Viv, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 5/7/2018 11:26:00 AM
Cute, John. Congrats on your win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line.
Date: 5/7/2018 10:02:00 AM
Very well-crafted. There's "no mocking" this excellent write, John. Congrats on your winner in the contest! Best regards, gw
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Gershon, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/7/2018 8:14:00 AM
Hi John, You have penned such a beautiful and well written piece. The rhymes and content are are amazing. I adore mockingbirds. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis, I appreciate it. Hope all is well with you. John
Date: 5/7/2018 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement with this delightful fun poem. Well written and refreshing. Enjoyed.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, I appreciate your comments and visit. John
Date: 5/7/2018 4:53:00 AM
This is a lovely poem and the rhyme and meter make it very lyrical to read. Just wanted to let you know that your comment about Nina's POTD....is on my POTD page. You might want to repost on the correct page. Blessings.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thanks for the comments, Eileen, I appreciate it. Thanks for pointing out that Nina's message was on your page. That is the second time that has happened to me; I think maybe it has something to do posting a comment as soon as the new POTD is posted. John
Date: 5/7/2018 4:40:00 AM
Ahh it s such a sweet poem, enjoyed reading every single line of this beautiful poem, good luck in the contest
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, Faraz, I appreciate your comments and visit. John
Date: 5/6/2018 10:33:00 PM
Nice poem John, I'm putting this one in my fav.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 4:24:00 AM
Donna, thank you for taking the time to read my poetry and thank you for the fav. John
Date: 5/6/2018 6:29:00 PM
very sweetly done, John and melodic like that bird's song.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 4:25:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/5/2018 8:54:00 PM
A lovely write, John! Flying high, trilling, singing a lullaby!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/6/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Kim, I appreciate your comments and support. John
Date: 5/5/2018 7:50:00 PM
A cool feel to this...good imagery... All the best John
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/6/2018 6:51:00 AM
Arturo, thank you for your comments and visit. John
Date: 5/5/2018 6:20:00 PM
Hello John, I really did enjoy this poem. It was a fun read. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/7/2018 12:19:00 PM
What does a mocking bird look like? Have anice day my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2018 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 5/5/2018 3:19:00 PM
beautifully written and perfectly rhymed! best of luck in the contest, john...
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2018 10:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ilene, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/5/2018 3:02:00 PM
The beautiful flow of your poem gives me the feeling of gliding like on wings, perhaps, of a mockingbird, John. Lovely! All the best in the contest! :) ~ Artsie
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2018 9:21:00 PM
Artsie, thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 5/5/2018 2:50:00 PM
I wish I was flying high with you John, what a lovely poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2018 8:57:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, I appreciate it. I used to have this recurring dream that I could fly, it was like swimming underwater but up in the sky. I would always wake up feeling so liberated. John
Date: 5/5/2018 2:47:00 PM
Wonderful rhythm that flows so beautifully in your amazing poem, John! Just lovely! Good luck in the contest :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2018 8:22:00 PM
Laura, thank you for your wonderful comments, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/5/2018 2:45:00 PM
I love birds and really enjoyed this poem! Well written and smooth to read and just perfect :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2018 8:08:00 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Heidi, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

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