The Missing Emerald Ring

There was a cute girl named Nadine,
Who loved to snatch things that were green.
An emerald she took
From Grandmother's nook
And thought what she stole wasn't seen.

Now Granny was simply amused
To see how Nadine's face changed hues.
She asked what was that 
Inside of her hat
That looked like a ring she did lose.

Nadine then began to invent
A tale of the emerald's descent.
"The cat knocked it down.
It fell on my crown.
Been stuck in my hair ever since."

Well Granny could not be beguiled 
From the looks of an "innocent" child
"Oh dear, it got snared?
Let's cut off your hair!",
Said she in a tone oh so mild.

Nadine shrieked, "Oh please don't do that!
It really was not the poor cat.
I took your grand ring
For the praises it'd bring.
I should not have acted like that!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Laurie Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Hello Susan … once again Susan, a great tale with a positive ending. Will certainly read more of your fine verse - thank you Susan - Lindsay
Palli Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 4:53 AM
Thank you, Lindsay!
Pekrul Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Well written limerick and a great tale. Granny was a wise woman and handled the situation with humour, while teaching a lesson.
Jones Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 11:59 AM
Wow, this made me laugh out loud, very very good story!!
Palli Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 1:50 PM
Thanks for all the encouraging comments!
Kimathi Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Your words rhyme so nicely like ocean currents and beaches' edge.... Congrats Susan, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy!
Rycroft Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Well done congrats on your Tall Tale xxxx
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy!
Eastman Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 10:38 AM
BRAVO! Congrats on your win.
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Thanks, Carol!
Y. Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Hi Susan, I enjoyed the way used limericks to tell a good tall tale. Congrats on your well deserved win: -) Alexis
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 8:09 AM
For me this is one of the best! Congrats.
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 3:02 AM
Thanks, Richard!
Day Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 3:15 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Tell a Tall Tale" contest - characters seem most real! - Jesse
Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 6:15 AM
Hi Susan. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Palli Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy!
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Very cute, Susan. Congratulations on your fine win in the Tall Tales contest. Hugs, Sandra
Palli Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Nance Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Over the line limit but still a good write, worthy of a read, thank you so much for entering :)
Palli Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thanks so much for mentioning my poem, Casarah. Great contest! It was fun to read them all.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Is this for the Tall tale contest? it's a really cute idea and good limerick flow, Susan
Palli Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Hi Andrea Yes it is for the contest, but it's too long, however I entered it anyway as I got inspired by the theme.
Roper Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Enjoyed reading :-) a7
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May 10, 2016 at 9:16 AM
I love this story, ...some lies little kids tell, LOL. Really lovely limerick Susan. #7 for me.~Abosede.
Palli Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thanks, Abosede!
Daniel Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Ha ha...great limericks:) tall tales do get their punishments..
Palli Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thanks, Jo!
Stebbings Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Lovely story, Susan. Very clever set of limericks, well done.
Palli Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thanks, Barry!
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