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The Missing

The sun now stalls halfway up its climb and skims a course barely above the trees. The swallows have gone. Spaces once filled with brightly coloured wings and crawling things are now empty. What is missing has hollowed out the day and left nothing but vacated shells and casings hanging like trophies on abandoned webs. An absence has taken hold. You move into the gaps left by others, make trinkets of ice to hang on branches that have lost their leaves. Every winter is the same, has you gathering what remains of yourself, trying to fill the spaces left by what is missing, knowing you can't, and never will as each winter passes you lose a little more of yourself until, one day, there will be nothing left and you will become the thing that is missing.

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Date: 5/28/2023 12:53:00 PM
As much as I love this mindscape and imagery (and I do!) I'd also like to say that interacting with you and your poetry has touched me profoundly. If I could ever declare myself a fan of anything, it's your words and poetry x
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/28/2023 6:36:00 PM
Very much value your kind words and ongoing support DD. It is an honour to learn that ones words find a home in the mind of another...do hope they are well behaved companions,. Appreciate the time you spend with the little winged ones I throw out of the window of my world.
Date: 5/28/2023 8:55:00 AM
Doesn't Winter bring with it such sad thoughts? The forbidding cold, blankets of snow that covers Earth's beauty... on and on, but once it's grip has loosened, we have a rebirth of so many lovely things. We must accept the chill of Winter to better appreciate the warmth of Spring. Excellent lines, Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/28/2023 6:24:00 PM
True words Lin, Winter is often a weighted time...a time for reflection, turning over memories, prodding the sleeping thoughts of mortality. Strangely I find it comfortable...inside enjoying the warmth...excuses abound to do nothing but read and write. Value yr comments Lin
Date: 5/27/2023 6:41:00 AM
and all too often they /we go missing long before they/we are gone. A very sharp and sad poem Paul. For Winter is cold and lacks feeling.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/28/2023 5:32:00 AM
Thanks John....very much value your comments.

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