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The Mirror

I looked into a mirror To see what I would see Only to find that there is nothing there Nothing looking back at me No mischievous smile No sparkle in my eye No glowing complexion To show that Iam alive I sat and I wondered I thought and pondered Was there is there Something wrong with me I smiled when I was happy I smiled when I was sad Just to make others around me Not to feel so bad The emptiness in the mirror I reached out to see Maybe I could feel something Instead of not seeing me It is a darkness That cant be described When even yourself Your own looks you have denied.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/5/2009 11:32:00 AM
This is amazing, nice job. I have so many times felt this way. If this is how you feel im sorry that you have to share the pain. Keep up your writings, i cant wait to read more. ~Jese
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Date: 3/4/2009 9:13:00 PM
Susan, this is a masterpiece! I loved it and I have often thought the same thing.
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Date: 3/2/2009 4:59:00 PM
i can tell you emptyed your soul into this poem it explains alot about you very nice work
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