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The Mirror - Itty Bitty

It is summer evening ; the ocean's skin moves like a dancing mirror.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2014 12:42:00 PM

Teddy, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/22/2014 12:22:00 AM

Thanks Linda! Happy Easter to you too,...... though late. I got into my desktop right this morning. Since Thursday, I was off. Sorry. Have a lovely day! <3 <3 <3 ^_^

Amy Green

Date: 4/20/2014 5:50:00 AM

OOOh, love the imagery, excellent.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/22/2014 12:19:00 AM

Thanks Amy! <3 <3 ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2014 1:09:00 AM

Great imagery Teddy,,, loved this write,, Congrats on great win !

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/22/2014 12:14:00 AM

Thank you very much Dr. Upma! ^_^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2014 12:45:00 AM

I read this one three times trying to envision your imagery. The ocean seems to have moods, but having skin is unique. Congratulations on your win!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/22/2014 12:14:00 AM

Thanks for your applause Connie! ^_^ I guess it's hard to skin an ocean though, lolest!!!!

Amy Green
Date: 4/20/2014 5:50:00 AM

I agree

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2014 11:53:00 PM

Hi, Teddy. I enjoyed your unconventional haiku. The idea of an ocean with skin was almost sensuous!! Congrats in my contest.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/22/2014 12:10:00 AM

Lol. I like bringing non-living things to life sometimes. Haiku is also a new poetry writing skill for me. I am glad my practice is paying off. :)Thanks for congratulating me in your great contest!! <3 <3 ^_^

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2014 11:02:00 AM

Lovely itty bitty poem Teddy; enjoyed! // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/20/2014 6:16:00 AM

ohhh ... and congrats on win, too :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/12/2014 7:18:00 AM

Thanks for your applause Mr. Paul. :-)