The Minstrel

The Minstrel

	In a doorway, squatting, strumming out of tune
	There sits a minstrel, gazing whilst he plays
	A string of chords, discordant in their mix
	Combining all his thoughts of better days.
	Unshaven, threadbare, clothed as once he did
	Before some unexpected fall from grace,
	So now he plays life’s thoughts for all to hear
	As passers-by avoid his careworn face.
	A flat cap holds a few small copper coins
	Reflecting those who understand his plight
	And so I cross and place a token too
	Acknowledged only by a nod so slight.
		His eyes look through me, seemingly to say,
		This could be you who's sitting here today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/14/2020 10:48:00 AM
Nice write Tim, I love the flow and the message, looks like with this pandemic there will be another epidemic...homelessness.
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Date: 10/13/2020 3:10:00 PM
Tim, this was so poignant and you created such empathy with the plight of the minstrel. I'm sure we have all been guilty of averting the eyes and walking on too. Last comment tonight before I drive you balmy! You have a real gift which I have been glad to discover! FAVE
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Date: 10/6/2020 2:35:00 AM
A reminder to all that anyone could one day find themselves in this position for whatever reason, powerful last two lines, Emilia : )
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Date: 10/2/2020 4:46:00 PM
This is a wonderful sonnet, Tim. The message is loud and clear. Always a good idea to keep it in mind.
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