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The Milling of Mind

Unrealities and realities grind together in mortar’s mouth, spilling, pulverizing, volatile perfumes— succumbing scents of citrus, crushed copper, musks of bruised lightning, threshing thunderous throbs. Instability incarnate sings her reveling wails, fragrances of something Beyond Name. I guide existences into black curve, severing them against sharp, obsidian walls, letting them rupture—letting them bleed —syrups and statics— messy marrows of forgotten equations. Their shapelessness mutable, pliant pages to pulp in the plunge of the merciless pestle. How many combinations will one blend and crucify— to crush, to coax, into coherence? Rasps of bone bend against sanguine salts, sheens of opulent oil merge with ember embryo— iron filings licked into life by tempests reigned. Anything of matter becomes moisture—mass—mold— hunger pooling at my basin’s heart, seething for impending strike, for sudden and unforgiving birth.

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Date: 4/19/2025 10:50:00 AM
Laura, the description of what happens in a mind is very dramatic and reveals a complex mind. It sounds like an appropriate amount of thought for the things that strike your fancy and explains why your poetry is so wonderful to contemplate.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/29/2025 1:44:00 AM
Thanks my friend—I appreciate you contemplating my words. Your thoughts have always been so cheerful and encouraging.. means a lot to me!! <3 Laura
Date: 4/9/2025 7:13:00 AM
Dear Lauren, What a tempest in a mortar, reality and dream ground raw into volatile alchemy. Those "bruised lightning" musk and "threshing thunderous throbs" are synapses firing wild. I felt it as a rebellion against form. You’ve carved a hymn to creation’s beautiful violence, where even "forgotten equations" bleed into something Beyond Name. - Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/15/2025 7:52:00 AM
You’ve felt it true, Daniel. I really appreciate your insights, your poetry, and your kindness… <3 Laura
Date: 4/4/2025 3:47:00 PM
This life laden poem feels like Fate to me, Fate musing on the grinding and glorious process of Life. Very fine alliteration herein, "I guide existences into black curve severing them against sharp, obsidian walls, letting them rupture, letting them bleed, syrups and statics...pliant pages to pulp in the plunge of the merciless pestle", Poetry as a flesh maker...J.A.B. A FAV!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/4/2025 7:22:00 PM
Thank you Justin for your beautiful thoughts. I had a lot of fun writing this one... <3 Laura

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