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The messenger

Raven, flying through the night bringer of everlasting rest against his word you must not fight Works for the one who takes the light the one who knows what time is best raven, flying through the night For although his words may bite to you he flew from his nest against his word you must not fight Through his master's strong might he can speak to the smallest pest raven, flying through the night His master sends him to the site and though you think I jest against his word you must not fight While I sit here, this I write he is perched on my shoulder cawing with zest raven, flying through the night against his word I must not fight

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Date: 11/8/2014 1:13:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Gabe - I choose your first very well written poem - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2014 1:21:00 AM
Gabe.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Date: 11/5/2014 2:56:00 PM
Excellent progression through the verses. Each time I've tried to take a stab at this form it seems to me stilted. Yours flows well !! Enjoyed !! Caw - Caw !!! Glad you did not ignore the words !!
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