The Memory of Lemon Juice, Gaza 2024

The Memory of Lemon Juice, Gaza 2024


The scent of leaves
we placed between our clothes
no moths would dare to eat
but these we left behind

the fruit we sliced, summer ripe 
packed in salt and sealed
preserved for later use
among the rubble of our home

my mother squeezed one each day
the drink she said
which gave her strength
but did not save her from the blast

before the bombs began
no home appeared complete
without its lemon tree
we cannot see where ours once grew

now we live in tents
wait hours in line for rice and mash
with our battered begging tins
the only things we own today

we talk and dream of food
recall the taste we crave
of boughs weighed down with fruit 
from the tree that blessed our lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 8/8/2025 1:32:00 AM
I came by here after reading your blog today Michele and thought I would take a look at the first poem you wrote here at The Soup. I wasn't disappointed. This is just superb. Powerful, poignant and superb. Cheers - Gary
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Michele Fermanis-Winward
Date: 8/8/2025 2:07:00 AM
Dear Gary, your respose to my poem is humbling, I am deeply grateful, Thank you.
Date: 5/30/2024 10:14:00 PM
A well-written poem with great meaning Some day I hope our leaders can stop these wars from happening .So that all fruits can flourish and stand tall which all mankind has the right to do free of hardships . Michele thanks for sharing we all deserve to live in peace .
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Date: 5/30/2024 9:09:00 AM
A very touching poem , well written in simplicity, without being pedestrian, depicting the realities of war. When warring leaders would come to grips with such realities!
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Date: 3/2/2024 1:54:00 AM
Heartbreaking reality of what war can result in and many forget the after effects of it.. sad how humans play with the innocent.. A touching poem, beautifully written...
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Michele Fermanis-Winward
Date: 3/2/2024 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, your comment is deeply appreciated.
Date: 2/23/2024 4:49:00 PM
Your poem is a poignant reminder that war is not an abstract concept for those caught in its zone. Well written!
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Michele Fermanis-Winward
Date: 2/23/2024 6:15:00 PM
Thank you Chetta
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