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For Miltonic Sonnet Contest sponsored by: Craig Cornish

Awarded: FIRST PLACE

The Miltonic Sonnet is:
A quatorzain, enjambment is used to tighten the sonnet,
leaving 14 lines unbroken by stanzas.

It doesn't have to be one sentence but mostly use enjambment
metered, iambic pentameter
Petrarchan rhyme scheme abbaabbacdecde
pivot evolves slowly after line 8

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Here in the final pages of her life She stops to rest a spell on empty lines Reflecting on the chapters left behind In valleys of a mind deep in contrite Where shadows battle with a blinding light Conflicting egos fighting on through time Their argument life’s reason and life’s rhyme They battle for the end that she must write Two equal pens held tightly in her hand Tears mingle with the ink spots on the page One pen telling truth one pen telling lies Her bleeding words like footprints in the sand On lines between a novice and a sage One pen she puts to death before she dies ~~~ Author: Elaine Cecelia George Written: April 20th, 2014

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Robert Lawrence

Date: 3/20/2015 4:00:00 PM

awesome man, you have the gift of words.

John Lawless

Date: 7/5/2014 2:23:00 PM

WOW....just reading some poems that I missed and came upon this gem. I think I shall remember that last line every time I sit to write another poem. Belated congrats on he win.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/16/2014 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on a well-deserved win!

Michael Dom

Date: 5/15/2014 4:01:00 AM

This is brilliant to me. Congratulations Elaine George.

Elaine George
Date: 5/15/2014 5:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Michael. Lainie

Michael Dom
Date: 5/15/2014 4:01:00 AM

fav.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2014 3:52:00 PM

wow, a very profound one and I see it did first place in Craig's contest. big congrats to you, Elaine!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/13/2014 8:13:00 PM

A wonderful return..I admire your work so much. BG

Elaine George
Date: 5/14/2014 5:40:00 AM

Thank you for your very kind comment, Barbara. It is nice to be here again among friends. Lainie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/13/2014 7:57:00 PM

Congratulations on great poem and win. Love, Joyce

Elaine George
Date: 5/14/2014 5:29:00 AM

Thank you dear Joyce. Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/13/2014 7:28:00 PM

Very very deep! So nice to read your work again Laine. Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Elaine George
Date: 5/14/2014 5:28:00 AM

Thanks Deb. it is nice to be here again among kindred spirits. Lainie

David Mohn

Date: 5/13/2014 6:58:00 PM

Congrats Elaine…I can see why Craig set this above all the rest. It is so smooth yet so conflicted…beautiful writing – thanks also for your kind comments on mine

Elaine George
Date: 5/14/2014 5:27:00 AM

Thank you for you kind comments, David. Lainie

Roy Jerden

Date: 5/13/2014 2:52:00 PM

Ahhh! Now THIS is poetry! Loved the Ying and Yang conflict here and the mystery at the end. I see some folks think truth survived, but I disagree. Diaries should be burned, not read.

Elaine George
Date: 5/14/2014 5:26:00 AM

Thank you for your very kind comments, Roy. Lainie

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/13/2014 1:53:00 PM

First of all, it is with such pleasure to see your name. I've always admired your poetry, Elaine, and some of us who have been here a long time, have roots in Poetry Soup..... The melancholy feel of this one, I think is real, rich with depth of true disappointment, but also rich with beautiful insight into oneself. You are so gifted!