The Melancholy Girl

"This poem is not about what is written,but what is not written..." The sky calls her melancholy her eyes are always sad, blue sky turning to gloomy and lake drying up seeing her. Her eyes are always sad a sadness that fills the nature, and lake drying up seeing her the sky hiding its blue colour. A sadness that fills the nature now standing infront of me, the sky hiding its blue colour but I want to make her smile. Now standing infront of me her eyes reflect her sad soul, but I want to make her smile so I send my mind's butterflies. Her eyes reflect her sad soul she needs some rainbow touch, so I send my mind's butterflies hope those butterflies do miracle. She needs some rainbow touch blue sky turning to gloomy, hope those butterflies do miracle the sky calls her melancholy. © kashinath karmakar (5th July 2011) =========================== Placement: 9th ;(July 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Date:5th July 2011 Contest:The Unwritten Sponsor:~Constance La France~
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Chandra Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Very well written...enjoyed reading it...
Villanueva Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 6:40 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! really excellent write....*_*junjun
Wesley Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Clever use of words Kash, Enjoyed the visuals too! :)
George   Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Beautiful, Kashinath.Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
Zzzzz Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 12:29 PM
A very nice write. Congratulations on your win!
Freeman Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 7:00 AM
Many Congrats. Kash on your excellent win in Constance's Contest. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 5:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 9:19 PM
Kash, wow you must have entered this stunning one in right at the last minute and I can see from below comments that you WON. Awesome!! I really enjoy your pantoums. You are truly becoming the pantoum king!!
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 2:48 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest , kashinath
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 1:22 PM
what a gem, kashi.. whooo… swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Congrats Kash on your excellent win with this dynamic write my friend.. another superb piece of poetry luv.enjoy..
Horne Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Beautiful piece, Kash. Many congrats : )
La France Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations Kash on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
Deshpande Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Well written...............! An excellent piece of work in this contest. Thanks a lot for your comment on my poem " TIME TO AWAKE"
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 6:16 AM
melancholia at its finest, kashi... what a peircing piece with winning huggs! :) come visit!!.. nette
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Let us wait and see what those butterflies do to her....
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