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The Melancholy Girl

"This poem is not about what is written,but what is not written..." The sky calls her melancholy her eyes are always sad, blue sky turning to gloomy and lake drying up seeing her. Her eyes are always sad a sadness that fills the nature, and lake drying up seeing her the sky hiding its blue colour. A sadness that fills the nature now standing infront of me, the sky hiding its blue colour but I want to make her smile. Now standing infront of me her eyes reflect her sad soul, but I want to make her smile so I send my mind's butterflies. Her eyes reflect her sad soul she needs some rainbow touch, so I send my mind's butterflies hope those butterflies do miracle. She needs some rainbow touch blue sky turning to gloomy, hope those butterflies do miracle the sky calls her melancholy. © kashinath karmakar (5th July 2011) =========================== Placement: 9th ;(July 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Date:5th July 2011 Contest:The Unwritten Sponsor:~Constance La France~

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Date: 7/13/2011 9:14:00 AM
Very well written...enjoyed reading it...
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:40:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! really excellent write....*_*junjun
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Date: 7/7/2011 5:43:00 PM
Clever use of words Kash, Enjoyed the visuals too! :)
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:32:00 PM
Beautiful, Kashinath.Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:29:00 PM
A very nice write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/6/2011 7:00:00 AM
Many Congrats. Kash on your excellent win in Constance's Contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 9:19:00 PM
Kash, wow you must have entered this stunning one in right at the last minute and I can see from below comments that you WON. Awesome!! I really enjoy your pantoums. You are truly becoming the pantoum king!!
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:48:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest , kashinath
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:22:00 PM
what a gem, kashi.. whooo… swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your excellent win with this dynamic write my friend.. another superb piece of poetry luv.enjoy..
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:38:00 AM
Beautiful piece, Kash. Many congrats : )
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations Kash on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:02:00 AM
Well written...............! An excellent piece of work in this contest. Thanks a lot for your comment on my poem " TIME TO AWAKE"
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:16:00 AM
melancholia at its finest, kashi... what a peircing piece with winning huggs! :) come visit!!.. nette
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:01:00 AM
Let us wait and see what those butterflies do to her....
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