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The Measure of a Fall

...inspired by the song 'Northbound 35' by Jeffrey Foucault Two hundred miles and counting, Kansas blacktop, batttling snow, visibility's poor, his sadness is mounting, from here to there he has nowhere to go. Lela left, took the kids and the horses, hostility raging and angry goodbyes, broken dishes and old, shattered promises, nothing but highway and tears in his eyes. Wichita, Lawrence, there's nobody waiting, mile upon mile with no real destination, no one to call, his memories grating, thinking the while of his elimination. Motels and hotels, the marks of community, churches that urge you to come on inside, Salvation Army, use them with impunity, doctors and hospitals serving with pride. Hope springs eternal, that's what they say, confidence builds as he goes on his way, to gather himself, shake it off, that is all, grace the true measure, the cure for a fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/15/2009 7:00:00 PM
Amazing. I love how you use imagery, and yet continue to convey the sense of gritty, cold hard reality. Great job here, Keith!
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:11:00 PM
Soup Mail, Keith. Don't know if you're up now, but I've been listening to Foucault. Wow!!
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Date: 4/14/2009 3:16:00 PM
As always, a good write Keith, you capture the sadness and lonliness..and the constant on the go feeling of the trucker...great poem! ~Trudy
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Date: 4/14/2009 3:00:00 PM
The loneliness and desperation in this poem are well-painted images of sadness, Keith. Life is like this sometimes, "mile upon mile with no real destination." Haven't heard the Foucault song, but it must be incredible to inspire such great poetry. You know I'm a fan! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:47:00 AM
Great work sir...You are a fantastic poet and writer, Your poem is full of imagery and rhythm. Your poem is relatable which keeps the reader focused and able to reflect on life! Your poetry helps people think! I feel it's part of the SOUP in our connections here to read other wisdoms and insights from eachother! Thanks for blessing us with your poem of wisdom and faith! You are needed here my friend, Keep up the great writting. Always your friend here at the shhhhoupie...Jane
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:31:00 AM
Beautifully done, Keith! You have aptly painted this scene of desolation and despair, however the last few lines you used a finer brush. A wonderous panacea is "grace". Sips of "Hope", gulps of love; a fall to a stumble, reduced to a minor miss-step? You didn't lose touch with me..I must be like bur-dock.:) God bless you and yours!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:41:00 AM
yes, impresive. this is the type of stuff that you want to hear when you've got the blues. jhl
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Date: 4/14/2009 6:43:00 AM
Impressive. I do like this poetry. Thank you for commenting my poem MonaLisa.
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Date: 4/14/2009 5:49:00 AM
Can picture this whole poem, unfolds like watching a movie....great writing! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/14/2009 4:16:00 AM
I love the Kansas theme in the piece..blacktop fighting snow..brilliant line...churches that urge you to come inside..love it..good writing Keith as usual.
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